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Omega Bill
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Post by Omega Bill »

[font=Comic Sans MS]Talk about my audios lacking when Id cut with a vocal like
A knife, Id sweat ya kid but unlike you a forum aint my social life
Your shit is nice? Who the fuck have you won against since you came?
MagicMark? Hoolio? Mutual Hostility? Fuck callout some1 with a name
Or atleast a little bit of rep cause that 5-3 aint shit to me when it was 2 rooks
And u look, like a fuckin bitch,much did you pay JayGunna to suck your dick?
Verses are sick? Let me repeat, you've fucking beat no one good the past 4 weeks
Ya fuckin assed out, like ya pussy is passed out, no one thinks ya battles are unique
The only thing different from you to most, is that your fucking bars seem to over-flow
To the next page ya structure nasty as ya punches, 2 shots from bill'll have u over-dose
Have ya fuckin ass comatose, fuck taught you to rap? Got the vocab of the 3rd grade
Talk alphabet when you prolly dont know yours, cause all your words are lame
Ill chunk up a Duc3 to the point where theres no speak, no talk, no swag when you walk
Made Gunna laugh, congrats, fact remains the last memory of your ass is outlined in chalk[/font]

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Post by Cee4 »

this was Ok bill but nothing special at all.
u had nothing that really stung coz their was no creativity and you just dissed what he has done since he came to the site but he has done well so it dosent really work.

also some was basic as hell
Talk alphabet when you prolly dont know yours, cause all your words are lame
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wtf

i know your gonna say it was a quick response but you obviously put some effort in to come with all that information on what hes done and who he`s beaten. then again u might just have a good memory.
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Post by DressToKill »

I suggest taking your time on a verse..you have no wordplay..very little punches..and no multies what so ever..Im not even hating just pointing out some shit so you can elevate..
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

..Was Better Than Tha Last Diss ..
But I Felt Duc3 Came Harder and Nicer Than You Wit Tha Disses ..
You Came Pretty Koo ..
But Duc3 Was Juss a Mountain You ain't Manage to Climb ..

Lol @ You Dissin Jay Too Tho ..

Stay Up Son
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

JayGUNNa
RELL FiaSCO

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Post by Omega Bill »

DressToKill wrote:I suggest taking your time on a verse..you have no wordplay..very little punches..and no multies what so ever..Im not even hating just pointing out some shit so you can elevate..

Check a page back and tell me I don't have creativity or multies.

No hate. But check your shit before you spit your lips.

Cee4 - Honestly, I was online for 7 minutes.

Rell - He's a much better battler than me and is a lot better with punches than I am, haha. I don't really care about reputation so I'm not too pussy to admit it.
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Post by JayGunna »

Oh Buddy...


Youve Done It Now....
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

Lmaoo Damn You Just Asked For A Death Wish..
DON'T DO IT JAY Lmaooo JK...

a-b lol i appreciate the honest...
The piece was Alright..better then ya diss towards dtk...but yeah...try to elevate dude on punches...
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Post by Omega Bill »

Buddy, you're really gonna think cause I mentioned your name casue every diss against me you think is amazing that I have a problem with you?

We've been through this song and dance. We already battled. You're wasting your time if you diss me.

Cee4 - I remember battles cause Im the one that closes and updates all of them, lol.
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My Name Should Have Never Been Mention...Sorry...
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