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Leave Alpha Bill With Lacerations....(KeyStyle)

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Taste The Steel Dissing Me Is A Head On Collision...I'll Break His Grill/
Listen Kid..My Agenda Is A Big Spender The Way Im Wasting Bill!!!//
Leave You Deceased The Worst Way You Wont Be Able To See Ya Birthday/
My Lyrics On Recess..And It'll Alp A Bill (Off A Bill)...Peep The Wordplay!!!//
Ugly Bitch Look At Ya Picture..Get Slaughtered When Im Grippin The Trigga/
TheOnlyPuffyWill (8:37:33 PM): lol, you're gonna take that shit seriously?

Damn Do Yall See The BITCH IN THIS NIGGA!!!//
Feel Threatened You Should...I Can Tell You Aint The Best In Ya Hood/
Jay Quick To Take Care Of Bill...No Wonder Why My Credit Is Good!!!//
Nigga Get Filled Up No Money But I Grip Dubs/
All I Gota Say Is BILL...U GOING DOWN PUSSY...Like NIGGAS IN STRIP CLUBS!!!//

Thats A Warning Next Time It'll Be War...
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Post by DressToKill »

Last two bars were pretty ill..Nice diss..Enjoyed the read..stay up dude
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thanks homie...
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Post by Arvincible »

Lmao good shit


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Thanks My Nigga...
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Lmao good shit


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Post by *.HarleQuin.* »

lol this diss isnt completely invincible so i think
the other two ppl who replied could have left
better feedback imo, i guess because of this being a
'warning' is wasnt as hard hitting. a lot of clever wording
but nothing to shut anyone down completely. i think he's going
to respond to this.
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

Are you kidding...Alpha bill Would get demolished By Jay... He Shouldn't Of Used Jaygunna's Name When It Didn't Even Involve Dude...

Az For The Piece..Nice..good piece.. i know you coulda came harder...but you came hard enough just to Kill Alpha...Nice Multi's.. punches and word play...Flow was good..


Bill how the fuck you gonna get bodied 3 times in one day fam....smfh...
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Post by *.HarleQuin.* »

no one said anything about jay not beating bill
nor do i give a fuck about how it started
i sed this verse isnt anything to shut him up
dont criticize my feed when u have no idea what ur talkin
about, take jays dick out ur mouth thanks
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Duc3 wrote:Are you kidding...Alpha bill Would get demolished By Jay... He Shouldn't Of Used Jaygunna's Name When It Didn't Even Involve Dude...

Az For The Piece..Nice..good piece.. i know you coulda came harder...but you came hard enough just to Kill Alpha...Nice Multi's.. punches and word play...Flow was good..


Bill how the fuck you gonna get bodied 3 times in one day fam....smfh...
Come on man, shit's over and done with. Don't talk shit. You can actually go check the battle between Jay and I and everyone that voted said it was close and I held my own. I don't see why you have to be a cheerleader when I admit when someone is better than me.

Jay - This piece was nice man. Like usual. Good multies, good punches. I don't know why you said it's warning after I said I'm not gonna be bothered responding. But good shit.
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*.HarleQuin.* wrote:no one said anything about jay not beating bill
nor do i give a fuck about how it started
i sed this verse isnt anything to shut him up
dont criticize my feed when u have no idea what ur talkin
about, take jays dick out ur mouth thanks

...Shut Tha Fuck Up Damn...Bitch You Getting Annoying...Go Get Raped Or Something...Scandalous Hoe..

@ Bill: That Battle Was No Where Near Close..I Saw It As A Fucking Cat Sweep....You Just Got Votes Because Of Dick Riders.
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LMFAO!
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Post by Omega Bill »

Duc3 wrote:
*.HarleQuin.* wrote:no one said anything about jay not beating bill
nor do i give a fuck about how it started
i sed this verse isnt anything to shut him up
dont criticize my feed when u have no idea what ur talkin
about, take jays dick out ur mouth thanks

...Shut Tha Fuck Up Damn...Bitch You Getting Annoying...Go Get Raped Or Something...Scandalous Hoe..

@ Bill: That Battle Was No Where Near Close..I Saw It As A Fucking Cat Sweep....You Just Got Votes Because Of Dick Riders.
Stop trying to get into S.A.W.
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

Nigga...Tha Fuck Would I Get Into Saw For I Already Have A Crew...Stop Sucking Bitch...You Ain't Shit Man...Hush Up...Before I Put You In My Swears...
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Post by Omega Bill »

I'm so shitty that the members of your crew ASKED me to join, LMAO.

Nice one, bud.
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