Sick With Words

- Mutual - · Post by **- Mutual -** » Fri May 30, 2008 6:50 pm

They Ask For A Vocab Like i'm A Bastard To Words
i'll Just Tie 'Em Together And Create Disaster With Verbs

Be Sure Ta incenerate Tha Bodies And Leave Tha Ashes
Come Back And Bomb Funerals While They Grieve in Masses
i'll Be Sure To Leave A Present While Tha Receive Tha Casket
Make Sure Everyones Hit When i Spray Debris From Ratchets

My Fave Bits^
nce flow multies on point and it was quite good
keep'em comin

ÐÛÇ£» · Post by **ÐÛÇ£»** » Fri May 30, 2008 9:53 pm

Chea Most Def One Of Your Better Drops...Ya Flow Is Smooth And Tha Multi's Be Killin'Em..You Doin Ya Shit Jj And Ya Need To Keep At It Homie...I'll Be Waiting For Da Audio Fam LoL..

Cee4 · Post by **Cee4** » Fri May 30, 2008 11:50 pm

this was good man. the first couple of bars were dope. really good start to the verse. i liked the cerbal palsy shit.

They Ask For A Vocab Like i'm A Bastard To Words
i'll Just Tie 'Em Together And Create Disaster With Verbs
i'll Sever Ya Cerebral And Leave Ya With Palsy Kids
Catch Ya "Home Alone" Quicker Then Macaulay Did

the last couple of bars were pretty nice too. i thought u kinda got lost for a couple of bars in the middle but you picked it up by the end. overall im impressed uv stepped it up in your last 3 or 4 drops in my opinion

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Sat May 31, 2008 3:48 am

i'll Spray Bars That Burn Like i Gotta Flask Of Mase
i'm Survivin A Fascist Race So i'll Smash This Place
Leave Flowers At Ya Funeral So Ya Moms Can Grab A Vase
Be Sure Ta incenerate Tha Bodies And Leave Tha Ashes
Come Back And Bomb Funerals While They Grieve in Masses
i'll Be Sure To Leave A Present While They Receive Tha Casket
Make Sure Everyones Hit When i Spray Debris From Ratchets

^ I Liked Dis Part Da Most My Nigggah..
Yooo.. U Up'd Ya Vocab A Bit in Dis So Dat Wus Kool
ya Multis WUs on Point My Niggah.. Loved Da Flow...

8/10... Look Out Fa My Next Drop.... WRITER OF DA YEAR < MEEEE Lmfao ...

*.HarleQuin.* · Post by ***.HarleQuin.*** » Sat May 31, 2008 6:50 am

YAY i liked the whole piece
especially because u upped ur vocab lots
i love how u didnt over do it either, complex vocab
but not over top, kept me interested. id like to see lots more of this

\\Come Back And Bomb Funerals While They Grieve in Masses
i'll Be Sure To Leave A Present While They Receive Tha Casket
Make Sure Everyones Hit When i Spray Debris From Ratchets<< nice flow here

Prophet · Post by **Prophet** » Sat May 31, 2008 4:36 pm

I enjoyed this piece, flow was straight, multies were definately on point. Vocab was good, a bit more complex than your other drops.

i'll Sever Ya Cerebral And Leave Ya With Palsy Kids
Catch Ya "Home Alone" Quicker Then Macaulay Did

i'm Survivin A Fascist Race So i'll Smash This Place
Leave Flowers At Ya Funeral So Ya Moms Can Grab A Vase

i'll Be Sure To Leave A Present While They Receive Tha Casket
Make Sure Everyones Hit When i Spray Debris From Ratchets

^ Favorite parts

Panama · Post by **Panama** » Sun Jun 01, 2008 12:56 pm

Good job man, nice steady flow throughout... good use of multies...

good job with that home alone line...

props man...

HKX · Post by **HKX** » Thu Jun 12, 2008 4:56 am

(i'm Survivin A Fascist Race So i'll Smash This Place
Leave Flowers At Ya Funeral So Ya Moms Can Grab A Vase
Be Sure Ta incenerate Tha Bodies And Leave Tha Ashes
Come Back And Bomb Funerals While They Grieve in Masses
i'll Be Sure To Leave A Present While They Receive Tha Casket
Make Sure Everyones Hit When i Spray Debris From Ratchets)

u had a lot of good lines on dis one but da lines above r my fav shit was sick dawg u got off much props homie

HKX · Post by **HKX** » Thu Jun 12, 2008 5:36 am

no doubt nigga

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