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DressToKill
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Dopeness

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With A Pen Im Creating This Art,My Lyrics Leave Emcees Breaking Apart..
I Got Writtens Like Vains,Cuz You Know My Flows Come Straight From The Heart!
Throw Punches I Dodge Bitch Hooks,In This Game Im The Only Sick Rook
My Games Like A Abusive Father,The Way That Im Always Leaving Kids Shook!
I Switch Up And Mix Patterns,Spit Madness So Bad I Got Emcees Left Wit Twitch Spasms
Constantly Grip Magnums,That'll Blow Ya Out Of This World And You'll Barely Miss Saturn
I Got Metaphors,That Are Embeded In Pores And My Mouths A Talking Berreta With Force
My Whole Games More Clever Than Yours,My Multies Are Gonna Come Forever With Torque
You Aint Smoking This Vet,Im Roasting The Set Cuz Im Potent With Text
Call Me The Randy Moss In This Forum ,Cuz You Know Everytime I Post Its A Threat!
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Re: Dopeness

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DressToKill wrote:With A Pen Im Creating This Art,My Lyrics Leave Emcees Breaking Apart..
I Got Writtens Like Vains,Cuz You Know My Flows Come Straight From The Heart!
Throw Punches I Dodge Bitch Hooks,In This Game Im The Only Sick Rook
My Games Like A Abusive Father,The Way That Im Always Leaving Kids Shook!
Dopeness man
great shit bruh, i like that part the most, nice deliver and hard ass punches!!
good job nigga
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Thanks dude..much props on the feed
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i Love Tha Closer ..
It Was a Dope Drop Fam ..
Props ..
Better Than That Last Drop ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..
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nice shit i really felt the punches
nice multies stayed on point
9/10 this sum good shit
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Thanks guys..loving the feedback
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Post by Kay »

Nice drop man, flow was pretty much perfect as in most of your drops an improvement imo, general content was nice too
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Post by 16 Micz »

it was nice, multis were on point

My Games Like A Abusive Father,The Way That Im Always Leaving Kids Shook!

i loved that line the most
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