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Kid You Know Im Feirce And Hot,If You Thinking Im Sincere Im Not
Battle Me?Ya Career Is Shot,Cuz I Put More Holes In Rooks Than A Peircin Shop!
I Come With Heat Plays,I Rip Pros And In Rap I Fail To See Lames
If You Spitting Violent,Then Kid Im Grippin Iron Like Tiger On The Freeway's!
Im A Barron Homie,You Aint Touching Me Cuz Im Always Tearing Foneys
Im Raw As Hell,My Squad Is Ill Cuz We Hold Our Peice Like A Marriage Ceremony..
I Got A Napalm Flow,Fuck These Faggot Mc's..DTK Will Break Ya Nose
Step To Me Kid..You'll Get Thrown Off Stage Faster Than Audience Members At Akon Shows!
You Cant Flow Faker,To Put A Whole In Dress You Gonna Need More Ammo Hater
Nobody's Fuckin With My Grind..I Touch More Keys That A Damn Piano Player
Last edited by DressToKill on Wed Jun 18, 2008 7:15 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by - Mutual - »

man nice flow
nice multies on point
nice concept but who you talkin to
and have you always bolded
ya rhymes cus i've only jus noticed

I Got A Napalm Flow,Fuck These Faggot Mc's..DTK Will Break Ya Nose
Step To Me Kid..You'll Get Thrown Off Stage Faster Than Audience Members At Akon Shows!
You Cant Flow Faker,To Put A Whole In Dress You Gonna Need More Ammo Hater
Nobody's Fuckin With My Grind..I Touch More Keys That A Damn Piano Player

my fave bit^
keep'em comin
and al of it was my favorite but
i thought i better highlight a specific bit
8/10
nice rhymes
Last edited by - Mutual - on Thu Jun 19, 2008 2:37 am, edited 1 time in total.
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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thanks and no this isnt aimed at anyone at all..just fucking with a freestyle hah
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good shit good shit
u shoulda put somethin in there about havein more plays than madden hencing the name

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did u mean my?
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Yes il edit that haha..and thanks
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Thanks dude..appreciate the feed
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