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MagicMark
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fuck with it or don't.....

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little wayne - brand new beat..

fuckin' with your girl, panties on the ceilin'
touchin and feelin' leavin' her feenin'
so sick with the sheets, makin' sure she don't clean em'
took me to long to write my name with the semen
understand im the man, always known to work that
forever play it cool, never getting' worked fast
tell ya girl ta bring a girl, can never get enough ass
but if she hotter than you then be prepared to get fucked last
put the metal to ya mouth, but it aint braces ya got
im erasin' ya plot, im hot n' jst face it ya not
oh you been talking to ya friends? N' they sayin' ya hot
couldn't be a head of ya time with ya face on ya watch
bury a n**** in the desert and wait for the eagles
or finish my dessert and head for the eagles
godfather style or should we keep it on the legal
buried under water looking up at the seagulls
punches surprising, opening ya sockets
leave you slit three times, like the openings in sockets
chockin' n' blockem leave ya broken' when im droppin
Cause ya only doublin' ya money, when its folded in ya pockets
maybe easier to kill, quick, grabin' thrills, blood will spill over bills, kids..
…will's splittin' ta keep spitting, cause rappers still getting' ill shit
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Post by - Mutual - »

man nice flow
multies are on point
easy layout to read

fuckin' with your girl, panties on the ceilin'
touchin and feelin' leavin' her feenin'
so sick with the sheets, makin' sure she don't clean em'
took me to long to write my name with the semen

my fave bit^
man keep'em comin but dont forget about are battle in the tourney
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by Vertikal »

No offence man, but yawn..
If i wanted to hear this man, I'd just walk into a random c.d. store and grab almost any c.d. off the shelf..
Be more original ya know?
I just bein honest.
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Post by Haz »

This Was Aiight Homie..
To Be Honest U Needa Chill With How Much Wayne U Listen 2 .
Dat Shit Prolly Brings u Down... U Should Try Comin More Complex..

Flow wus koo.. It's Jus Theres Nothin Dat Stands Out...
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