Sweet Dreams

[-TraMaTiK-]

heres a song i wrote a lil bit ago n recorded it 2day,yea i kno theres some pops n there thats cuz i dont gotta pop filter yet,but newayz leave some feed if u wud ill get back@u with it too

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6593730

[16 Micz]

its coo, you're gettin better at audio, the lyrics were cool, but ur flow was a lil choppy-ish

still cool track....glad to see more people doin audio.

[MesaR]

its alright.. it sounds like you running out of breath though, lyrics were alright too didnt know if they worked well with the instrumental witch is pretty dope, but keep working on it man.. stay up aaaannddd by any chance can you tell me what this beats called? or hit me up on msn and send it to me thanks

[16 Micz]

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6415652


there ya go, and the guy who made is a beat jacker.

[HKX]

beat is nice so r da lyrics; keep droppin audios da more u do da more you'll get better at it dawg it's gonna help u in da long run

[Cee4]

this was good. the beat is dope i heard that a while back and thought it was the shit. the delivery still needs a bit of work but its getting there.

one complaint is you ruined the hook by talking over it. shoulda just let the sample play.

[Young K]

Yo i did a lil something to this trying to collab?