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A Classic In The Making

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A lil verse I put together the other day... hope y'all like it!


I told ya, the streets need some noise
so I put the beast back in the Beastie Boyz
whatever i do i don't give emcees a choice
that's a sign of weakness, feed em my voice
the beats rejoice when i enter the booth
let me assemble the youth and show u the truth
raise up to the critics, show em that hip hop
aint dead - i'd rather have my shit drop instead
prove em wrong, cause legends are laughin
echo in the night, the dead are graspin - at us
tryin to reach us and teach us the basics of a classic
grab the mic or pass it like a cypher
a hot verse or a hot ass, it's hard tellin what's nicer
I know i can cause nasir told me so
and like his better half i can't control my flow
it's so spectacular, u should call me dracula
by the way I plaster ya like a massacre
it's the passion of the christ, we die like martyrs
but we don't serve a god, we only artists
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Post by Haz »

It Was Pretty nice son..
Aint Like da Cypher punch
Da Multies Wus On Point pretty much..
The Flow Was on Lock..
Message Got Across..
Leave my Script Feed U bastard
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Post by MagicMark »

hmm nice enough, flow and rhyming were cool, punches could have been better, more creative, get what im saying

this piece was no where near "fire" imo, nice key like.. but not my type of piece..
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Post by - Mutual - »

man well sum nice stuff all round
nice multies
nice flow
but i couldnt really say it was ya best drops
but it was nice 7/10
jus me

it's so spectacular, u should call me dracula
by the way I plaster ya like a massacre
it's the passion of the christ, we die like martyrs
but we don't serve a god, we only artists

my fave bit^
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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this was more or less a keystyle that i posted.. the title was just to draw your attention.. guess it worked.. lol.. thanks for feed guys.. it's appreciated
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