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Somethin never used.

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http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/water ... t9520.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/broke ... t9645.html

This was suppose to be a collab with me, viral, and kurse but it never happened, i dont believe there was even a beat for this, figured i'd post it since i'll probably never use it(dont intend to)

smoke been spittin-against-this, my flows rippin-ya-senseless,
i'll be skippin-the-entrance when the scriptin-commenses,
my teaching's unknown like a hidden-apprentice,
my style's flippin-relentless, reversin shit-in-a-sentence,
so these sentences-spitten must be relentlessly-written,
when i have poison bars mirrored back like my reflection-was-speakin,
i'm infectin-the-season to start killin by inventin-a-reason,
n that reason is to begin provokin-a-theft,
no holdin-ya-breath, i've stolen-wat's-left so u start chokin-to-death,
have u sniffin crystals like i turned ya coke-into-meth,
lyrically broken-the-vets, now we hopin-to-bet,
that my next punch will straight up open-ya-head,
have ya brains stickin out so i can read-ya-mind,
so sick with rap, i can breathe-a-rhyme,
i'll step on ya back to crush-n-squeeze-ya-spine,
see smoke'll fuck u up like dust-n-weed-combined,
now trust-in-me-to-find a fuckin-beat-designed to feed-the-blind,
words of literature that illustrate in the art-of-rap,
so deadly it'll stop ya cardiac like a heart-attack,
i'll tear up the parts-ya-lack with the scars-to-match,
AME with the bars-attached, only way out is death,
so before i start-to-check like an architect,
i'll have kurse strangle u till he marks-ya-neck
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Post by - Mutual - »

nice flow
nice multies
stayed on point
8/10
i liked it

n that reason is to begin provokin-a-theft,
no holdin-ya-breath, i've stolen-wat's-left so u start chokin-to-death,
have u sniffin crystals like i turned ya coke-into-meth,
lyrically broken-the-vets, now we hopin-to-bet,
that my next punch will straight up open-ya-head,

my fav bit^
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

appreciate it
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

This Drop Was Good Fam ..
Multies Were On Point As Usual ..
Flow Was Good ..
Punches Weren't That Hard Hittin ..
But it Was a Nice Piece Tho ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by Arvincible »

Dope.

I thought u died.

Good shit. Multis nd complexity are 9/10.
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Post by HKX »

shit was nice nigga u should've recorded dat shit but hey fuck it its better if u wrote 2 a beat n e wayz shit was nice homie
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Post by Scip »

nice flow

nice multies

everythings on point

fellas not everything needs punches...writtens can be writtens bout anything...idk i just dont see some writtens havin punches in em...its whatever tho

good shit e

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