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This quick poem is a person getting aids.
Which is a metaphor for one of my relationships

she told me one day
that stars are romantic
they faded away
with unsolved semantics
i told her to stay
she never had planned it
but she made it ok
i didn't see damage
she stayed a day
our love expanded
which paved the way
for my other panic
as we layed betrayed
it happened dammit
I had played a spade
and she had vanished
now i'm afraid ta pray
I just cant manage
can't get rid of aids
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

so do you have aids homie
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by complexity »

No... Lmao.
A few people will know what i'm talking about.
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Post by Invincible »

It's good man. There's other fish in the sea. I recommend a bottle of Wild Turkey and a prostitute. Heals like neosporin.
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Post by aidskill »

i think i know what this is talking about.
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LOL^
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AKA SCOTCH HALL, MOE MEIJER & MOMEIJAH.
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

2 years later.. lol
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Post by aidskill »

EkomS wrote:2 years later.. lol
hush your mouth.
do you still have aim?
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Post by - Mutual - »

well since we here nice poem plex real feeling to it
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by Viral »

man E aidskill really seems to wanna talk to u...LOL!
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Viral wrote:man E aidskill really seems to wanna talk to u...LOL!
Hi, who are you?
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Post by HKX »

lol hell naw aids hahaha nice drop tho dawg i was like wtf but i got it i think u on sum immortal technique shit
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Post by Cee4 »

Plex was that a metaphor for your relationship with Wikipedia?
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