In The Mirror

[- Mutual -]

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jus got board so i decided to write sumin heer we go

Chorus:
ha we all encounter shit in are lives it's a dance
we wish we could spit and then die but we cant
this maybe one of my many many rants
but do you like who you see when you see the miror man

Verse 1
so here i am to spit shit on illest to ruin this entity
was it ment for me dunno but fucked up my identity
fuckas gettin sent to me i killem wit a hollow tip
i write rap about hoes n shit where as you obviously this horrors bitch
he my rival my idol cus i can eat is his survival
like a disciple he stays beside you
he resides right inside you a monster maybe the size of the eiffel
the next day you've killed can you stand to look
at this man in the mirror no MAN A CROOK!!
yo shocked ya cant play poker ya hand is took
you watch right beside you get mad and land a hook
then you realise shit it's metal so u ran n shook
ya hand in bandages the devil a bishop ya diagonally taken cus you a rook
flowin real cold cus of all these problems ya facin
its like hamilton racin
ya turn there's cars which is problems which is why ya shakin
maybe why ya be late in
we jus spit are shit split mafucka then it's up fo the takin

Chorus

Verse 2
so you sat down he jus stops n stares u rock n glare
ya shout does errbody hate this looney in the glass wit dark hair
thats not me so who do i see there he doesnt compare
then a voice says that was you when you were better
he couldnt spell buretta he worked fo money not steal fo his cheddar
he didnt once impede on fuckas comin up n risin
he couldnt be divisin a plan to get to the top on his bosses word which he ridin
there you got sumin to confide in but he daint get known so went into hidin
then hatched a evil unleashed not from hell but a demon unleashed
fiendin wit peace but brings war to hated to say the least
so how did you live with out that neutral shit
cus even now when mutual spit,i see whats to come future ya'll quit

Chorus

yeah took my time writin a piece like this so i hope it's better

[Scip]

aight mututal

i liked the piece...the flow was ehhhh...multies were more incoporated in the second verse and they were decent just work on em...but the content i was feeling

just keep writin and try to incoporate more multies and work on the flow a little...other than that my dude it was pretty good

stay up

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[- Mutual -]

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