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fuck you talking about man i said write your own
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Post by Viral »

hmmm that must explain y u sent me ur verse?!..saying oh record it real loud n blah blah...it wont sound good in my 5 dollar mic n shit......yeah n a lil mention of writing my own...but mainly recording urs....
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Post by drunken jesus »

it isn't nothing about tradition or anything some verses are structured different but the hooks are still half the length, if you spit that it even on a custom made beat it would sound like the chorus is another verse
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yeah you right man
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Post by precise »

an actual bar is 4 tempo beats, not 2 snares, snares are the off beat used to jazz it up and are not reliable enuff to keep tempo and count, lol just thought id put in my 2 cents
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yo guys the guy just wants to submit a written however the fuck he wants dont insult him cuz hes trying to get the written>audio idea goin , so thank him instead of bullshittin alright.
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invincible can ya make the verses longer or show me the beat thats this short?
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dude u fuckin rant n rant...shut da fuck up and get some substance in ur damn raps...lol fuckin queer
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yo nigga dont be talkin "mad shit" . lmao
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Post by drunken jesus »

its a stupid idea a mic is like $5, whats the point of writing shit if you don't plan on recording it

what he described is basically ghostwriting except the ghostwriter writes the track and records over the beat to give an example of how it should sound when its rapped

no self respecting mc will record and other dudes rhymes just cause he don't have a mic or wants to see how it would sound with somebody else rapping it

with all that said... holla at me if anybody wants a track wrote $75 a verse $50 a hook, or $350 for a beat and a full 3 verse track wrote over it
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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LMAO @ all killah the bussiness man
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