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Twin Berretas (Magic Mark And DressToKill Collab)

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Alright..dope collabo..the bolded text is Mark..and the regular is mine..this is some other level shit so peep it and get ready to be amazed! Hit em Mark!

I got tha, west, tool, look you aint beating the best fool,
when my every shot is caws-in trouble, like birds needin' rescued
dawg im a beast, its obvious on who they bet, ill screw ya best
Cause all I get is “Dope Propsâ€
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Post by - Mutual - »

damm nice flow from both
nice multies both stayed on point
i liked it 8.5/10

yo dress thats cold, we be killing these fools
i bet our feed'll be bananas like gorrillas in zoo'z
me and dress both the sickest, you'll be dead with us..bleedin'
my shots got kids coming back for more like a heroin dealer

my fave bit from Mark^

In This Rap Shit Im Hotter Bastard,Our Games At A Slaughter Standard
Our Punches Will Leave You Dropping Like Golfers In A Water Hazard
We Grinding And No Thugs Realer,No Ones Fucking With Us Either!
Kid You Know Our Joints Are Hot Like A Mexican Drug Dealer!

my fave bit from DTK^
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Thanks Mutual..
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Post by Haz »

Coulda Sworn This Was a Subliminal At First..
Cause Dress Said.. 'Hazard'
And Mark Said 'Has Been' lol.
But Aint No1 Said Nothin So i'll Take it As Jus a Written...


This Was Pretty Nice..


Cause all I get is “Dope Propsâ€
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Nah no subliminals lol..Its just a straight freestyle collab
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Post by Arvincible »

Dopeness, the magic dress is tearin it up lol,

I like the cuban employment bar, shit was loud..

That was my fave, I think mark stood out with the punches not considering the fact he had a verse more but yeah dress had nice multis and the flow was catchy for both of u..

I was expecting more wordplay from dress though, and there's a lot of fillers here. That's the only negative.

Keep it up guys

7.8/10
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Thanks Arv..this was more to showcase Marks shit than mine..
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Post by Cee4 »

lmao cheerleading a text verse is never a gd idea in my book

but this was pretty dope. simple structure and flow made the punchlines hit harder. and there was plenty of punchlines. both u have a similar style and u compliment each other well

Mark And Dress Are Sly Dog,Fuck With Us And Get Hit Wit A Tire Rod
Your Styles Fraud,While We Get More Gig's Than A Ipod!

Im A Clever Cat,Im Dedicated To Spit And Forever Rap!
And In Sex Ive Crossed More Chest's Than A Treasure Map!

who would deploy ya, im a beast n' the tool would destroy ya
so I just stand and box these fags all day like Cuban employment

^^^
favourite bars from the verses. good shit
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Post by MagicMark »

lol, thanks for the feed guys, shit will be returned

as for the piece, yeah its good, me and d just decided to bs' some shit on IM.

The reason mine is longer, is cause at that time, i came up with alot of plays, whereas d was perfecting his, so when it came to down to adding and putting it together i had more lol

But it aint nothing, D showed he top notch even with only a handfull of bars...

good shiz..
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