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Haz
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I'm still insearch For a invert that'll have me Sky-High
Inconsistent Cause When im On top My High-Dies
Being a Winner helps? na My inner Self, Snaps-Frequently
Cause even niggahz who Kill hiphop r on Da Map-Recently
my Minds Shiftin,forget Movin Fingers i Ratha Snap-Decently
grab a Tool or Stab a Fool,Shit Even-Pop-a-Pill
Dat'll Make my Breathin-Stop-Fa-Rill...

My Mind's Goin in A-Motion With Emotion,Over Devotion
To Find Da-Potion,That'll Have Um Chant-My-Name..
That Formula i Cant-Obtain, i "Pant.in.Vain"...
Exhausted,BREATH-LISS..In my Mind i Ain "Livin Right!"
ima Walkin DEATH-WISH..Traped the Game ain "Givin Light"
This Real Emotion,For it..I hadda Explore-Some..
i Wus Tore-Son, Thinkin Where is Dat Door-Dun??
Walkd Thru Da Door Of Skill & Watchd More-Come..
Want Average?
Pulla Smac BATTLE FOR-UM..Or Bring Um Thru Any BATTLE FORUM!
Sick Of Rap..Niggahz in Da hood Forget of "BANGAZ" Dey got CLUBZ FA DAT!
If This Bullshit Continues Catch Me On Da Block Where da DUBZ IZ AT!
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Post by - Mutual - »

nice multies
nice flow
8/10
pretty good shit

Being a Winner helps? na My inner Self, Snaps-Frequently
Cause even niggahz who Kill hiphop r on Da Map-Recently
my Minds Shiftin,forget Movin Fingers i Ratha Snap-Decently

my fave bit^
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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ÐÛÇ£»
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

Smooth ass flow...Multi's was On Point...Coulda Used Punches But Without Dem It Was Good...Short And Sweet... 8/10


I Wus Tore-Son, Thinkin Where is Dat Door-Dun??
Walkd Thru Da Door Of Skill & Watchd More-Come..


^^ my fav line...
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Good Looks..I Wasn't Fuckin With Punches..
It Was Ventin
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Post by Arvincible »

Yeah real dope haz, one of my faves comin from u, I liked the
"Niggas that kill hiphop r on da maps recently" bar
Sghit was nice, smooth flow and catchy word plays, nigga pop a pill so my heart stops fa rill lol shit got me goin damnnn

9/10 keep it comin haz
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Uppin For Feed.
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