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[align=center]I'm A Little High..Well Scratch That..Hella High..I Just Popped Six Pills So Fuck It...

This Is A Tale About Tha Dark Regime
And A Man Who Was Out And Lost His Scheme,
Word Was Scary He's Born To Burry An Adversary Who Had To Carry Cash And Scurry.
Fuck A Prime Minister I'm Sinister Wine Limits Tha...
Killin,Villians,Stealin,Dealin And Mentionin Of Tha Adrenaline Feelin...
I'm Tha Mayan Architects,You Tryin Hard To Flex,
Incarserated An Strapped Down,Because We're Hated An Black Now..
Beyond The Usual War Tactics Addicts See More..So The Bombs Delusional
Known To Extract Guns At Funerals...Services Tha Nervousness Of The Sniper,
Tryna Get Paid..Learnin And Rappin Cyphers,While Rich Man..Determined And Catchin Vipers, Annihilate The Oppressor Then Violate The Cross Dressor(No Homo)...But Now..It's Infinite Times Infinite Times Remember D' Shines With Remedy Lines,Identity Signs,TO A Major Contract, I Sexed Ya Family But Never Gave Ya Mom Back...She Was Somethin Serious...I Even Ate Her Pussy..While She Was On Her Period....[/align]

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woaah nice vocab
flow kinda choppy but it was good
8/10
kep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by Prophet »

This piece was pretty good, the flow was cool, I liked the use of inners. This was pretty dope for a free.
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good free b...flow was on point...multies were nice
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