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Savagery and defiance, i ravage the streets with violence and with manic-destruction,
Similar to a satanic-corruption, i raise hell n fire from underground like a volcanic-eruption
U can't collide-n-clash, only explanation to the garbage drops is ya mind-is-trash,
I'm fillin the skies-with-ash, niggas got their shit twisted like tornadoes inside-the-ass
Im shovin blades-in-ya-bladder, do watever it takes to have ya brains-on-a-platter,
Arv gettin cake so it aint-gonna-matter, cuz im eatin desert with ya remains-in-the-batter!!
ill kick u if u fall cuz I hurtfully-down-dudes, and mah loud crew will purposely-sound-rude...
Higher than im allowed to, I'm atmosphered/at most feared, just runnin circles-around-u!!

I killed it so death-to-the-cyphers, its the world wide web n now we infest-it-with-spiders,
With the Best-of-the-fighters, SAW controls the Future like we possessin-the-biter...
Bastards, i run through SAW's, not an axis/axe's so this world aint enough-for-the-masters,
Outrunnin-the-fastest, Global warming aint so alarming, cuz arv be nature's toughest-disaster!
This sinner's a menace, I perform a holocaust from beginnin to finish, then ill bend-n-bow,
We movin strong n Predictions only proven wrong, so Fuck 2012 because the end-is-now...
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Post by Omega Bill »

Shits fire man.

Came nice in pretty much every aspect. You've elevated a lot.
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Post by Cee4 »

good shit. nice flow multis. punches could of hit harder.

Savagery and defiance, i ravage the streets with violence and with manic-destruction,
Similar to a satanic-corruption, i raise hell n fire from underground like a volcanic-eruption

Bastards, i run through SAW's, not an axis/axe's so this world aint enough-for-the-masters,
Outrunnin-the-fastest, Global warming aint so alarming, cuz arv be nature's toughest-disaster!
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Post by - Mutual - »

loved the multies wasnt really gettin the flow
good tho liked it more than some of da others
8/10
nice stuff

i killed it so death-to-the-cyphers, its the world wide web n now we infest-it-with-spiders,
With the Best-of-the-fighters, SAW controls the Future like we possessin-the-biter...
Bastards, i run through SAW's, not an axis/axe's so this world aint enough-for-the-masters,
Outrunnin-the-fastest, Global warming aint so alarming, cuz arv be nature's toughest-disaster!

my fave bit^
dope stuff keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by HKX »

shit was nice dawg mad props nigga
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Post by Arvincible »

thanks mann much appreciated of course


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Post by MagicMark »

lol, this was nice, plays where nice and simple, which where effective fro the piece, multis and flow where hot

Outrunnin-the-fastest, Global warming aint so alarming, cuz arv be nature's toughest-disaster!
This sinner's a menace, I perform a holocaust from beginnin to finish, then ill bend-n-bow,
We movin strong n Predictions only proven wrong, so Fuck 2012 because the end-is-now...

those lines stood out, good shit man..
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Post by -MiiLz. »

Lol Dude is This Shit Fire Or What??
You Spazzed The Whole Shit
"Higher Then im Allowed To" Hahaha ..
You Elevated Alot Man ..Keep On Droppin Like THis
Then U Gonna Become More Peoples Top Rapper..


I killed it so death-to-the-cyphers, its the world wide web n now we infest-it-with-spiders,
With the Best-of-the-fighters, SAW controls the Future like we possessin-the-biter...

^^^^ A Nice Personal/Punch Line ..
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