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Haz
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To-Let-You-Know a Few-Get-To-Go..Against
a Beast-With-Savear-Rage..Who'll Bring White Sheetz-With-a-Clear-Page
You Can 'Write-Ya-Will-With!',You Got No Writa-Skill..QUIT!
The Game-You-Graspin-On Cause U a Lame-Whoz-Rappin-Pawn..
Why do you Care-To-Write? U Aint TEARIN-MICZ U Don't MEASURE UP
Mus Be Celcius Flow Cause Dis Aint FAIR-IN-HEIGHT!
Im Psyco-Homez Yeah i Dont Like-Yo-Poemz
Lil PAC Wanna Bes..Yall "Micro.FONEZ",i Go Witha Microphone
Like a Paddle n Boat, i Can Travel-The-Globe
With a Gavel-and-Robe.."Judgin" ya Shit Yall Declared Gravel-datz-Rode
Hazardous Flow a Condom Can Prevent-Me?-Maybe-Dun..
Like a Institute Meet, Da Event-Be-Crazy-Son!
When i-A-Gree To Hit High-Da-Gree'z
Plane n Simple.."Sun Flys The Seas"
I Chose-Ya-Mornin..4 Every Noble-Warnin..
"Hazard Raised The Flow" Like Global-Warming..
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Good Looks Homie
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-MiiLz.

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Why do you Care-To-Write? U Aint TEARIN-MICZ U Don't MEASURE UP
Mus Be Celcius Flow Cause Dis Aint FAIR-IN-HEIGHT!
Im Psyco-Homez Yeah i Dont Like-Yo-Poemz
Lil PAC Wanna Bes..Yall "Micro.FONEZ",i Go Witha Microphone
Like a Paddle n Boat, i Can Travel-The-Globe
With a Gavel-and-Robe.."Judgin" ya Shit Yall Declared Gravel-datz-Rode
Hazardous Flow a Condom Can Prevent-Me?-Maybe-Dun..
Like a Institute Meet, Da Event-Be-Crazy-Son!

I Chose-Ya-Mornin..4 Every Noble-Warnin..
"Hazard Raised The Flow" Like Global-Warming..



Best Parts ..Nice Multies,Punches, And Wordplay ..Which Stood Out The Most in This Scripture. Overall id Rate This 8/10.
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Post by Omega Bill »

Whole piece had on-point multis. Some spots didn't hit hard as others, but the piece as a whole is pretty nice man.

Mus Be Celcius Flow Cause Dis Aint FAIR-IN-HEIGHT!

Lines like that are just killer wordplay and a nice ass punch.

Keep it up man.

8/10
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Post by Arvincible »

Yo the fair in height line was ill

I quote bill and tgyh, the wordplay is consistent, multis were good, pretty solid bars in most places, good shit niggah
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