Hook:
I'm risin to fame
i'm comin up
i'm risin to fame
yet i aint dumbin up
i'm risin to fame
get ready i'm bringin my name
Verse 1
i came up in school quit compaired to the other to dilligent
i was no einstein but when came my rhymes with force like they was millitant
graduated got nto a fucked up game
magazines hatin rappers sum reason like a stupid name
rappers hatin mags hatin they cant stand to lose fame
when i arrived amazed people changed cus i was a new brain
up n risin goin up this rappers food chain
alotta problems in life is real dont take my name in vein
say it wrong and ya head go thru yet another pane
of glass i whoop ya ass different like everyone of ya DNA strains
built up rep i was known to be violent-crazy
doctors says it was me i think it's the lack of SILENCE-MAYBE!
make beef one week comeback thinkin we gravy
but it aint like dat i put this fucka to a grave see
i dont wanna slave B but i will give up wit lyrical-madness
i'm glad i'm not mad gods writin thats write a miracle-had-this
its fucked up we get stabbed cus of this physical-sadness
this shit is a sinnicle-havoc causin mayhem like ti's the clinical-standard
its notmaditory but thats another story ha
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Risin To Fame.....
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
!!ILLEST MINDS!!
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
!!ILLEST MINDS!!

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this Was aight..
The Structure Was Pretty Fucked Up ,
i Wasn't Feeling The Flow..
The Militant Line Was Cool...
Your Multi's Don't Really Impress Me..
you Forced Da Shit Out Of Um in Ya Battle With Millz
If U Gunna Drop Multis Don't Force Um...
Anyways i Aint Liek Da Hook.. But Ur Experimentin
So Props.. Keep Doing You... i'll Tell U When U Crack ya Egg Shell ..
The Structure Was Pretty Fucked Up ,
i Wasn't Feeling The Flow..
The Militant Line Was Cool...
Your Multi's Don't Really Impress Me..
you Forced Da Shit Out Of Um in Ya Battle With Millz
If U Gunna Drop Multis Don't Force Um...
Anyways i Aint Liek Da Hook.. But Ur Experimentin
So Props.. Keep Doing You... i'll Tell U When U Crack ya Egg Shell ..

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aiight thanks if u check out this piece the hook is better
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/jus-w ... t9898.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/jus-w ... t9898.html
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
!!ILLEST MINDS!!
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
!!ILLEST MINDS!!

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