Dear Dad...

Prophet · Post by **Prophet** » Thu Jul 17, 2008 4:27 pm

Shit was deep fam, pretty short but i could feel the emotion in this piece. I could feel the agression, from a lyrical standpoint, shit was straight.

it's Always Been Your Fault That i Grew Up in Tha Streets
it's Always Been Your Fault i Grew Up With Nothin Ta Eat
You Couldnt Fill Ya Role Too Pussy To Be Tha Man Of Tha House
No Ass Whoopins From You Moms Was Always Handin 'Em Out

^ Stand out bars to me.

Overall I was really feeling this drop.

Subsist · Post by **Subsist** » Thu Jul 17, 2008 9:53 pm

great piece man. you shouldnt hate him cause if it werent for him you wouldnt be alive would you.

DressToKill · Post by **DressToKill** » Thu Jul 17, 2008 11:21 pm

Definently a cool drop man..this shit was nice and the emotion was definently present..I was really feeling this cuz none of your rhymes were forced so it allowed me to keep reading without having to re read some shit..I liked how you presented your ideas..Nice drop fam

- Mutual - · Post by **- Mutual -** » Fri Jul 18, 2008 1:57 am

defo a dope deep piece right here
i liked it it was a very good read
if ya do come back after u go keep'em comin maybe you'll have more inspiration

Omega Bill · Post by **Omega Bill** » Sat Jul 19, 2008 6:52 pm

Short, very emotional piece.

Pieces like this hit harder than a typical piece because you let your barrier down and let people see inside your psychy.

Dope piece man. Flow was on point, the emotion could not be over-looked, which sometimes happens in these pieces. The closer definetley was a nice one, it added a type of satire to lighten the mood but the underlying feeling was hatred.

Good shit.

-MiiLz. · Post by **-MiiLz.** » Sun Jul 20, 2008 1:48 am

This Was A Nice Deep Drop, You Should Of Made it Audio. Yeah it Was Kinda Short, But For 12 Lines You Got The Shit Out Nice. The Flow Was Nice, And You Had A Nice Concept.

You Couldnt Fill Ya Role Too Pussy To Be Tha Man Of Tha House
No Ass Whoopins From You Moms Was Always Handin 'Em Out

No Child Support No Visitation Nigga You is A Bum
Moms Gave Me Ya Picture.. Guess Where i'm Viewin it From?

i Put it in Front Of Tha Barrel An Actually Wish it Was You
i Love You Too Dad.. Haaa Dont You Wish it Was True

^^ That Stood Out To Me..overall Nice Drop.

Arvincible · Post by **Arvincible** » Sun Jul 20, 2008 7:03 am

I loved the piece, short and straight forward and the whole way through the flow was smooth, the multis were nice and the emotion was really brought out. Very moving, these are the kind of pieces that I love to read..on the personal side I hope things worl out better for u n ur fam in anyway man. Keep ya head up.

Kepp dropping as well. Good stuff 10/10

Arvincible · Post by **Arvincible** » Sun Jul 20, 2008 7:03 am

I loved the piece, short and straight forward and the whole way through the flow was smooth, the multis were nice and the emotion was really brought out. Very moving, these are the kind of pieces that I love to read..on the personal side I hope things worl out better for u n ur fam in anyway man. Keep ya head up.

Kepp dropping as well. Good stuff 10/10, no flaws really..

Dead Silence · Post by **Dead Silence** » Mon Jul 21, 2008 4:26 pm

good shit.
felt the emotion in this one

very strong in this one.

were u pissed when u wrote this?

vote please
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/dead- ... t9911.html

Dead Silence · Post by **Dead Silence** » Mon Jul 21, 2008 4:34 pm

well keep it up..
its good shit

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