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.. Dear JJ ..

Dear JJ,
Hey Kid, U May Think i`m ya Daddy, Cus i Hit That Raw, But ya Moms Tha Biggest Whore ..
Ya Dad Could Be Tha Prick Next Door, She Be On Every Corner In Tha Hood Like Liquor Stores ..
There Was Musta Been a Split in Times, Nine Months Lata Popped Out a Wack Kid That Rhymes ..
Days Don't Add Up, She Was Mah Sunday Bitch, U Was Born Monday Kid, While Her Sis Sucked Mah Dick From Behind ..
Lil Bad Ass Runnin Tha Streets, Tryna Fill His Belly and Grub, Never Did ya Moms Tell Me U a Thug?..
Crackbabi, ya Moms Belly Barely Gave a Pug, Notice i Wasn't Rockin Tha Crandle, Cus No R.Kelly in Mah Blood ..
Hoe is Think When ya Moms Name Rings, idk if it Was Tha Head, Or That Her Coochie Was Able to Shape into Strange Things ..
Angel Of STDs & Her Back Wit Flamed Wings, I Knew U Wasn't Mine, Cus She Told 12 Different Niggas Tha Same Thing ..
Ain't No Way in Hell That Mah Son`s Coward, Lil Nigga Run as Soon as He Smell Gun Power ..
I Kinda Miss ya Moms She Made Me Cum Showers, if You is Mine, i`ma Put Tha Shell to Mah Seed Like David Sunflowers ..
Cus I Know Mah Boy ain't Got a Borin Flow, This One is Different Wheneva He Rap Niggas Start Snorin Yo ..
Sorry Son i`m Not ya Pops, ya Moms ya Know She Hoe, I Thought We Settled This Shit Wit Tha DNA On Maury Show ..

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Rell "Not ya Father" Fiasco
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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She Be On Every Corner In Tha Hood Like Liquor Stores ..

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That Was A Nice Personal, J.J Going Hate On You And Start Crying His Ass Off LIke When He Lost To Millz.
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Post by Haz »

lol Wow^ stupid As Fuck

Nice Topical..


Hey Kid, U May Think i`m ya Daddy, Cus i Hit That Raw, But ya Moms Tha Biggest Whore ..
Ya Dad Could Be Tha Prick Next Door, She Be On Every Corner In Tha Hood Like Liquor Stores ..
There Was Musta Been a Split in Times, Nine Months Lata Popped Out a Wack Kid That Rhymes ..
Days Don't Add Up, She Was Mah Sunday Bitch, U Was Born Monday Kid, While Her Sis Sucked Mah Dick From Behind ..
Lil Bad Ass Runnin Tha Streets, Tryna Fill His Belly and Grub, Never Did ya Moms Tell Me U a Thug?..
Crackbabi, ya Moms Belly Barely Gave a Pug, Notice i Wasn't Rockin Tha Crandle, Cus No R.Kelly in Mah Blood ..
Hoe is Think When ya Moms Name Rings, idk if it Was Tha Head, Or That Her Coochie Was Able to Shape into Strange Things ..
Angel Of STDs & Her Back Wit Flamed Wings,

Nicest Part Anyways..

The Flamed Wings Part Was Creative...


Storyline Was On Point..
I Really Hope This Wasn't a Diss B.. Cause If it Wasnt it Was a nice Topical..
Nice Way 2 Open ya Mind..

Anyways Keep Dropping ..
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

It Was a Topical Diss ..
JJ Had a Drop Callled Dear Dad ..Lol
So I Flipped it ..
..But Good Looks On Tha Feed Back
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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LOL Daaamn, You Got Murked Didnt You J.J???,
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GoodLooks On Tha Feed ..
Uppin ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by Dead Silence »

good shit.

very creative in this one.

but it seemed like u shared the diss to his mom rather than all on him but aside from that shit was straight.

very funny too.
the sunflower seed line and closure were the best outta all of it.

good job
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Post by Arvincible »

Dope,

Rell came nice on this piece, flow was iffy some parts but overall nice at punches and clean wordplay, pretty much everything connected.
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