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Post by Viral »

New Track by me n Ekoms, peep it, leave feed, ill return da favor



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1st Verse: Viral
Hook:Viral
2nd Verse: Ekoms
3rd Verse: Viral

Recorded and Mixed by: Viral
Last edited by Viral on Sat Sep 06, 2008 7:39 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by Subsist »

this is definetly ekoms best, his lyrics were clear and the way the multis flowed was perfect this time , but he needs more emotion.

no comments on viral.

i didnt like the hook.
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Post by Kurse »

I thought it was one of Viral's catchiest hooks yet!

But yea...Ekoms elevation over the past few months is coming along great. His working with us is definately helpin him up his game! But I will admit...he does need a lil more emotion in his tracks. He just hasn't found the comfort zone in his presentation yet...but he will. Trust me..just give it a couple more months.

Dope lyrics by Viral ofcourse.
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Post by - Mutual - »

dope lyrics nice track all the way round
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by Dead Silence »

this is that song i was telling you that u sent me on AIM. i forgot the name lol.

chorus is very catchy. i can deff. jam out to this one

Ekoms' verse was his best track by far. like stated above.

viral same shit. hot shit lol

overall

8/10

nice work budd

(this just reminded me of sumtin. i was watchin Kurses Youtube videos and the one where u were in ur like ITS VIRAAAAL. hahha i love that.)
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

1st Verse: it was good but i dont think u came as hard as u cud of on this one
Hook: pretty solid no complaints
2nd Verse: definetly showin improvement from the last track i hurd him on,emotion is still kinda lackin but ull get it in time,keep practicin on the emotion other then that u sounded pretty good
3rd Verse: best verse u had man,good job to me it outshined the first

overall it was pretty good guys keep droppin
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Post by Viral »

the feed i much appreciated...ill def return the feed..just got mah internet back on....
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Post by Haz »

Viral The beat Sounded Like Go To Sleep Ina Way
You Said Fuckin Waaaay 2 Much B Waaay 2 Muuuuch..

Ekoms You Aint Have No Emotion He Sounded Likke He Was Readin His Shit off a Paper Plus He Sounds Like a Mexican..
Ya Delivery is Ass Homie...
Lyrics Wus Coo Though....


Anyways

The Track Ova All was Cool Yall
I Dont Like The Chorus Though The Beat Wus Dope
Thought Virals Prescense Was nice On This Track
Only Thing Was The First Verse Had To Many Fuckings...


Keep Droppin

Ekoms Me And u Still Needa Battle B
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Post by HKX »

dis shit right here is one of my favs 4rm u dawg u snapped on dis shit beat is dope ur lyrics are dope, koms got off on dis shit he gettin better, da hook was catchy as fuck lol u need 2 send me dat track nigga so i could make it into a ringtone
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