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Suckka Emcce Freestyle 08'
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no oofense i wasnt really feelin
i mean the voice had no feeling to it
not to sound gay
the beat wasnt that dope but not all of them can be
but well one of the others songs on ya album could be better maybe
i mean the voice had no feeling to it
not to sound gay
the beat wasnt that dope but not all of them can be
but well one of the others songs on ya album could be better maybe
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
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Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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The instrumental you chose was too simple. It was just a bunch of snares, claps and low hi-hats. Not tryin to be mean but I absolutely hated the beat you chose!
As for the flow. It's aiight...you got sum flow goin on, but your punchlines are real grade-school'ish. I'm not dissin you or anything, I just think the punchlines were real easy ones that anybody could've spat. I personally don't use alot of punches in my tracks, I focus more on flow, delivery, entertainment, concept & impact. But seeing this is a freestyle...that's what freestyles were kinda made for...they were made for showcasing your punchline delivery.
I give this one a 5/10 for being a freestyle. Would like to hear some new material from you.
As for the flow. It's aiight...you got sum flow goin on, but your punchlines are real grade-school'ish. I'm not dissin you or anything, I just think the punchlines were real easy ones that anybody could've spat. I personally don't use alot of punches in my tracks, I focus more on flow, delivery, entertainment, concept & impact. But seeing this is a freestyle...that's what freestyles were kinda made for...they were made for showcasing your punchline delivery.
I give this one a 5/10 for being a freestyle. Would like to hear some new material from you.
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