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Aggravated (Produced By WIZ)

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Aggravated (Produced By WIZ)

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yo whats good yall the names iLLrated new to the site. The track "Aggravated" produced by WIZ is off my upcoming LP "Under Rated" peep it out and let me kno what u think, Ill mos def reuturn the love

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well it wasnt bad um
ya got more of a DMX or Ja Rule Voice
so more aggressive the lyrics werent bad
the beat i wasnt really feelin but maybe one of ya otha songs is better when i here anotha keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by Subsist »

Beat, delivery and flow were excellent. The lyrics are pretty good. Track has replay value. Only problem , which is a big problem , is that the track has no good topic or message.
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yo preciate the feedback now i understand this might not be the most complexed joint but there is a topic and message if u really listen, I mean peep the title I'll admit this is one of my more basic tracks I guess u can say I try to do everything if you feel me? So Im not always gonna be talking bout meteor showers wizardry type shit. But i guess I cant satisfy everybody which is coo its not supposed to be that way.. but thx again
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Post by HKX »

dis track was aight beat was dope, so were ur lyrics they was straight not bad 4 an audio
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