track feat. The Zodiac, Doc Cause & DJ NST
order: 1st-Zodiac 2nd-iLLrated 3-Doc Cause hooks/scratches done by DJ NST Produced By: CJ Beatz
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Kurse
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Zodiac had the dopest flow and rhyme scheme in my opinion. Dude got off on that verse. ILL you did good too, you kinda have that loud-raspy style similar to like Busta Rhymes, DMX or Mystikal. Not my type of sound, you kinda remind me of a juggalo-rapper (no offense ofcourse). But you still have nice flow, don't take it to heart...that's just my opinion. As for Doc...I honestly wanted to turn the song off when I heard him. His flow is aiight, but kinda choppy and I hate his voice. He sounds nasaly or stuffed up.
As for the instrumental...I like the DJ effects, style and scratching. It gave the feelin of 'original Hip-Hop'...I like throwback soundin beats like that. Overall the track was nice and mixed very well. I'll give it an 8/10.
Keep droppin.
As for the instrumental...I like the DJ effects, style and scratching. It gave the feelin of 'original Hip-Hop'...I like throwback soundin beats like that. Overall the track was nice and mixed very well. I'll give it an 8/10.
Keep droppin.
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drunken jesus
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i mainly agree with kurse, zodiac killed this, your verse was good i dunno something threw me off though i think your flow could've been a lil smoother it was a lil choppy probably a breathe control issue, hook was put together nice, not feeling the 3rd dude at all his voice is bad and his flow & delivery were weak, beat was knocking, mixing was on point
you got alotta potential i think if you put a lil more emotion into your shit kinda on some sticky fingaz type shit and get your breathe control down you'll be set
you got alotta potential i think if you put a lil more emotion into your shit kinda on some sticky fingaz type shit and get your breathe control down you'll be set
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Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
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