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Just messin around


So you know it hurts finding out ya momma left ya
and u wishin death ta every do gooder tryna give u a lecture
u aint takin shit be"cause u a rebel" rebel cause
but you cant shoot as fast as the devil draws

Real

ya daddys stuck on needles and ya think to yaself
Ya health is ya wealth and u gettn nervous knees rollin wrong like ya luck was feebleIn fact
the fact is ya brain is in tact but the tactics dont keep fresh like a pack of tic tacs
coz the instrument you tuck is evil

Real

your topics goin red need a bump like u struck with measles
You deceive ya eyes coz you believe the heat on ya rap sheet
u persist and perceive to die, u beleive that death is life and thats weak


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I dont know why, but i cant help write audio style :S so again flow may be weird as fuck to you. Unless u can read it. Ive tried to help you read the flow abit with the bolded parts.
I dunno.

Feed me :)
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feed.
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Post by Flux »

Pretty Dope For Some Fuckin' Around Shit...Nice Wordplay In It...The Read Felt Like A Lupe Fiasco Rap lol Thats Not A Bad Thing Tho Keep It Up Fam
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good Lookin on the feed bro.
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Post by Stratosphere »

What was that ???? Didnt feel that one at all ! Can't even say the lyrics were there ... looks like you tried to spit a Royce style verse and you aint from the hood . Wow ! grade:C-
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Ehh fair 'nuff. Good Lookz on the feed
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