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ya dead wrong get ya head flung by redrum wen the wrech swung
so many bars make u swet lungs, dont ask werz my set from cuz i just
Get'em


my lines are deadly printed mean, my legs spreaded like gymness teams
asses fleeing with masses of fat asses like americas women breed
catistrofic, dis cat-is-trophic, I make u hip-hop with so much rap- it causes
well welcomed animosit cuz i deposit fags to vomit like they was a fossit
make u twitch like ya pubes-was-ripped, i bruise-a-bitch ur useless-kid
i grew up a screw up thus ludacris, ur battered n beatin and Im the crucifix
each second my lines acumilate aluminate fumicate these roaches
living in a caked out estated u assume i aint but i comsume these weed roaches
slice you in the juggular spot not any other-gots fire dis girl is summer hot
i tear u from da toung-to-crotch I lunge with guns-n-scotch Ima fuckin juggernaut
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Post by Omega Bill »

Aye this was dope man. Definetly got some skill in there.

Good for your first drop.

Why the fuck is your name Panda?
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Post by - Mutual - »

this was pretty dope nice flow
nice multies
good impression fo ya first drop
n why is ya name PANDA by the way
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by Arvincible »

Haha u got some talent...I just used that cat-is-trophic line a few weeks back..but I give u props for it anyways...and r u a chick or what? Cuz u said u " leg spreaded like the gymness teams.." That's pretty gay...lol

Anyways other than that ur drop was pretty decent mann
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Post by Panda »

LOL really u seen that line before? well i assure u I didnt jack move a negro 4 it.

And idk, i like pandas
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