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Soon as he let the clip fly, it seemed like only a second went by
No regrets in dis Bitch eye, just Death, the end of this kid life
Whats next? When the bullet from the gauge hit, left the kid faceless
Put a hole through the boy dome just to show he had brains, shit
And the pavement, stained it, the scene that was staged remained sick
Nameless, police couldn't place a name on this maimed kid, brainless
Tears flew from a near roof, but non here boo, save it for his wake, miss
Neighbors come to take a glimpse and deranged kids watch as the cops yellow tape this
That's what happens when U take risks, Glock still remind u dat u aint shit
Like the feeling when u got the cops still behind U and U aint quick
Face it, the kid was sent to rest in a long Peace, last thing he saw was concrete
Wished to see Palm Trees and a warm beach with his moms in Arms reach
While he lasted on this planet, remained enthusiastic and the thought that..
He had the chance to be the first man in his fam to go through college
Till his dome became a target, and the flash from the gat put an end to all dis
In the midst, this is what becomes of kids who fight, and die, but pray for good
While growing up in a blighted neighborhood, an Angel stood
Over the corpse, to bring him up to heaven through a light, that God sent him
Killer sins try to dim it, but its bright, and God forgives them through their plights
Though the essence of this fight makes it seem like no ones ever destined to do right
But still, We like to say a prayer and Bless them every night
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Post by - Mutual - »

this piece was pretty good
nothin to special to me
but the flow was good
the multies played a part in that
nice concept the story line shit was pretty good
man keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by Gutta »

thanks bra. i tried to depict a scene of a dude dead in tha streets
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