Stay Awake

[Speechless]

When I spit your mind goes to a blank.
I'm built like a tank running you over.
I got your girls pussy out ready for me to spank.
I'd like to give thanks to all my fans.
You say that I'm a no body.
The water was green and I turned it to blue.
Don't know how to follow quit trying to pursue.
You need more school and that book to review.
My debut was announced and then you became me.
My birthday was Friday the 13th.
The land is greener on this USA turf.
My words don't obey the laws of your ears.
Wake up in the morning with a drink from that café.
Wide awake now the display is clearer.
This presentation had me trying to portray god.
I steal from the rich and prey on the richer.
You better duck when I come around its hunting season.
Your head got you scared putting up a front.
Stop calling your aunt to keep your back strong.
Lip this blunt and quit being a weak punk.
I throw bombs to smoke you out.
Get out that hole I'm provoking you to strike back.
You attack my center because you couldn't take a joke.
Stay woke with one eye open.
Quit sinking those R&B karaoke songs.
Sing from your heart with your own darts.
If you blink you'll miss my punch out swing.
I'll send your ass back to Beijing.

[precise]

how long u been writing?

this was ok, not hatin but it was very basic, keep practicing n try to get into some multie syllable rhymes

on a more positive note, pretty good use of vocabulary