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Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Steady Flow, And Emotion.
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thanks, i'll probably be recording alot more lately finally got a decent set-up working
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by Subsist »

your flow wasnt good at all , maybe for the first 2 lines of the song then its all ruined. and you're kinda runnin outta breath or inhaling too close to the mic.
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Post by precise »

sorta hard to understand, but pretty cool, sorta sounds like your holdin your breath a bit

audio quality was nice as hell, i think itd be dope if you rehearsed it a couple times and also did a double or a punch in on it, rhymes seemed pretty immaculate too

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Post by drunken jesus »

i lowered all the breathes but yeah my breath controls shit

yeah it was just a one take jawn you can hear the fuckups toward the end of the verse
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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