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I'm Like Shiftin-The-Needle,Spittin-da-Diesel..These Writtins-is-Lethal..
Da Boy-a-Spit..N Destroy-Ya-Click..Appetize Fa Fece's i'll Enjoy-Da-Shit
I Won't Give This Jerk-a-Sweat, i'll Merk-a-Vet..'Get Ya Bars up' Fuck Perkasetz!
Cherp-ya-Set..If U Up-Ta-Da-Test..His Crew'll Break Fast Den i'll Supa-da-Pest..
Insteada Rap See Who Can Buffa-da-Best..Like Oral Herpes Put Da Suckah-Ta-Rest
Only 'Number Rounds' They see is In Played-Pool..Dood's Get Gwop? They-Fools...
You Can't "FLIP WAIT!" Like 'Stay-Cool.'..'God Beliefs' All Dis 'Prays-Fuel'..
We Rapta's-Still..My Team Makes Plague Blueprints We Draft-da-ill..
Leave Ya Garbage At-Da-Fill.Cus Like Possessd Plastic Ova Faces i "Wrap-Ta-Kill"
Im Quick-Ta-Go,Enflict-Da-Flow..On a Prick-Fa-Sho..Trick-Ya-Kno U a Tic..a..Hoe
A Lil Kid Who Kicks-da-Snow..you Tryna Build Up I Wont Allow it i'll Plow-it..
FLow Go's 'BOOM!'..U on Dat POW-SHIT..Shit-Ya-Dope!..Na..
Why Real Niggas Ain GIT-TA-VOTE?!?..Incase Niggas Say We NECK N NECK..i'll SLIT-YA-THROAT...
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This is Wack, Stupid And Pointless, This shit Didnt Make Sense.
You Was Talkin That Shit But You Lost To Millz LOL
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Post by precise »

Like Oral Herpes Put Da Suckah-Ta-Rest
^^ lmao this made me laugh, good shit

Plastic Ova Faces i "Wrap-Ta-Kill"
^^interestin concept, has potential to be a nice punch
"suffocated with surran plastic.. could say i wrap-to-kill" or somethin


not a bad piece, good rhymescheme, lol i liked it
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facin me? its mission impossible, like pickin up lesbian broads
fuck all these thespian frauds, they "bug me" like espionage
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i Liked This Piece, Tha Flow Was Hella Sick, Fa Real ..
Thas What Stood Out to Me
I Can See U Rappin This On Tha Corner For Some Reason ..
Lol, Props Tho
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

JayGUNNa
RELL FiaSCO

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Word..

Thanks Alot For Da Feed Cise N Rell...
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LMFAO i Knew it, You Still Crying Over That Battle u Lost in?
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Kid. Keep Ya Lil Thoughts Out My Scripts...

Uppin 4 Feed..
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Aiigh Then Kiddo
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Post by Kurse »

Gotta agree wit Rell...shit had a few bars that were just bananaz

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Post by Mass Effex »

It jumped around alot but had some good multies
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Post by complexity »

One of your better drops again.

"Cherp-ya-Set..If U Up-Ta-Da-Test..His Crew'll Break Fast Den i'll Supa-da-Pest.."

Huh?

"FLow Go's 'BOOM!'..U on Dat POW-SHIT..Shit-Ya-Dope!..Na..
Why Real Niggas Ain GIT-TA-VOTE?!?..Incase Niggas Say We NECK N NECK..i'll SLIT-YA-THROAT..."

That last line was real ill.

You need to mesh your new found clarity with your old school punches.

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Post by Haz »

lol Word?!
Alright Plex
i'll Make sure To Take ya Advice
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Post by HKX »

good shit Haz like dat Herpes line lol
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