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I Dont Discriminte I Fuck a Bitch & Penitraite Bend Her Waist Right out of Place Who Needs a 16 I can End A Verse in 8
I'm Monster with the Scripts Put an Auction on the Pitch & Give you all your Moneys Worth With Out Droppin any Sense,
Everything I Spit's Billgerent Believe Me I Get Ignorant an Enigma Formed in Cinema Motion Violence To the Innocent,
I'm a New Horizon Blended With Cut Throat Vivid Images Sire or you Eminence Which Ever you Pretend it is,
Extended to the Limits Kid,I never Rip I Slaughter if you Had to Choose whose Hotter ? ask you rMedual oblongata,


ok ok i'm done lol just got off work so i thought i'd key summn quick..holla
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Post by Haz »

lol True Dat
You Got Way More Potential.
It's a KEy Though.
Liked The Vocab U Used THough..
And THe Sense Shit is Sorta Played
But I Like How U Spit The Play
MAde IT Original..

Keep Um Comin ..
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Post by precise »

^^^^ lol i dissed hazard here with a very similair "sense" line when we battled

anyway dude, not to bad, as they were sayin u usually drop alot nicer, this piece was still straight tho, flowd nice for a key up, n i like readin the shorter drops to be honest lol
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facin me? its mission impossible, like pickin up lesbian broads
fuck all these thespian frauds, they "bug me" like espionage
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