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Gutta
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Bullet pains pinchin, leavin homies brains missin
Makin our livins off the cocaine cooked in the dope mans kitchen
Kid playin' get popped with the gauge when the snipa spottin ya brains
We go back like graffiti on trains or Rakim and Kane
Watch what ya sayin or get dropped for ya swatch and ya chain
Fuck watcha jewels cost, Load the gat and watch as ya cap blew off
Now who Boss? Gutta bring the storm like Katrina and Gustav
It's on, Close to bein folded I been rollin on thin ice
I aint respected rap since dey took Soulja Slim life
And now Im back, relaxin', sippin Coca Cola Classic
And Jack Daniels, Lacin' up the Gat handle with plastic
Just another day in my section, even killas pay for protection
And I aint talking bout from AIDS but from AK's and wessons
So stay in ya section, Im far beyond correctional facilities
Dawg they aimin at my head if I test em hope u feelin me
Concealin heat when I roam down the back streets of the Old town
Packin street sweepas, the four pound, loaded at ya dome
The chrome gonna go BLAOW! Now who callin the Po now?
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Post by Haz »

Flow was bananas ...
Loved The guttaness Brought into Dis piece..
Some Nice lines dawg
" Kid playin' get popped with the gauge when the snipa spottin ya brains
We go back like graffiti on trains or Rakim and Kane
Watch what ya sayin or get dropped for ya swatch and ya chain
Fuck watcha jewels cost, Load the gat and watch as ya cap blew off
Now who Boss? Gutta bring the storm like Katrina and Gustav
It's on, Close to bein folded I been rollin on thin ice
I aint respected rap since dey took Soulja Slim life "

This Shit was puuuuure ill Homie..

And i Liked The Section Part as Well..

keep Droppin Homie..
8.5/10
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Post by - Mutual - »

yeahj the flow was bannanas
but this shit was great the multies were fire
the concept was great my favourite pt.
haz has mentioned keep'em comin this was straight fiya
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Thanks Haz and MH

just spittin the real


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Post by Cee4 »

lol typical verse from you.
good flow, some grimey shit, dope lines, rapper name drops..etc


Fuck watcha jewels cost, Load the gat and watch as ya cap blew off
Now who Boss? Gutta bring the storm like Katrina and Gustav
^^^^
dope bar here
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Post by Mass Effex »

It's on, Close to bein folded I been rollin on thin ice
I aint respected rap since dey took Soulja Slim life
And now Im back, relaxin', sippin Coca Cola Classic
And Jack Daniels, Lacin' up the Gat handle with plastic

Those were my favorite bars. I agree on the Soulja Slim thing
That flow was insane, it flowed all the way through.
I ain't seen one whack verse from you ever fam.
8-9/10. Keep Droppin man.
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"Fuck watcha jewels cost, Load the gat and watch as ya cap blew off
Now who Boss? Gutta bring the storm like Katrina and Gustav "

that was dope as fuck man!!
Very nice piece yo.

I havent read many of your drops you cause I am still new here. but goddamn!!

Keep them coming yo.
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