EPIC PROPORTIONS

[Cee4]

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Im crowned the most godly atheist coz no oddly faith exists, grab some tonic n im blazin
The path to glory, im on it n im chasin, racin, the decibels gone astronomic like inflation
Satanic reflections, its demonic what im facin, Cee 'takes out shit' like colonic irrigation
Words anabolic n im lacin, the mixture, drop after drop im a hit it's a fixture, im Hitler...
With scriptures, I spit just to rip ya, when ma shit hit the Richter my spirits come lift ya
Constrict ya, reply? Im long gone in the sun, spits so lethal I wear a condom on my tongue
On site! I`ll bomb Com`s to a slum, im fly major, like engaged phone lines.. u can try later
Illest lyrics miracle, high saviour, shoot the stars, claws in the clouds… lyrical skyscraper
Critical vibrator, got em shakin, its ma ritual to climb heights, fuck spiritual my minds right
Spittin darkest poetry its physical I blind nights, move so quick im only visible in hindsight
Super lyrical n mines bite, posses what slayed vets need, add weight like sprayed wet weed
Corny congregations, make played sets bleed, a bar a day from me is still breakneck speed
They require new lines, got train wreck needs, I`ve got dope rhymes farmed n their opiates
Wordsmith, armed like the Soviets, check the font, I got a Blueprint to harm em like Hovi did
Invasion with bars, sick like Asians with Sars, attributes combined im a constellation of stars
Punchin teeth through eye sockets,
Givin dental facelifts and scars, my flow they 'straight jack it', im a mental patient with bars
Your logical is weak, it's a plausible defeat, Cee4`s like acapella……impossible to beat

[Ambiguous Realm]

nice drop, probably one of the best i've seen from a while, 9/10, i like how u smoothly went from one rhymescheme to the next n thru in a few inner multis here n there, some nice punches in it too

[Cee4]

thanks man.

uppin. this shits nearly off the front page already

[Mass Effex]

8/10
I like the multies and word choice you used in there

[Haz]

Im crowned the most godly atheist coz no oddly faith exists,

lol Loved The Firs Line Of Multi's...

Flow Was Deff On Point!... Loved The "Fixture Scripture" Part...
The Colonial Line was Coo, Ain Hit 2 Hard But Did The Job..

Illest lyrics miracle, high saviour, shoot the stars, claws in the clouds… lyrical skyscraper
Critical vibrator, got em shakin, its ma ritual to climb heights, fuck spiritual my minds right
Spittin darkest poetry its physical I blind nights, move so quick im only visible in hindsight

LOL Liked The Vibrator Line Fam..
Rest Was Straight ..

Super lyrical n mines bite, posses what slayed vets need, add weight like sprayed wet weed
Corny congregations, make played sets bleed, a bar a day from me is still breakneck speed
They require new lines, got train wreck needs, I`ve got dope rhymes farmed n their opiates
Wordsmith, armed like the Soviets, check the font, I got a Blueprint to harm em like Hovi did


^ U Came Correct Son... Jus the Way Ya Plays Hit.. How Ya Flow Was..
And How U Got More In Depth...

Givin dental facelifts and scars, my flow they 'straight jack it', im a mental patient with bars
Your logical is weak, it's a plausible defeat, Cee4`s like acapella……impossible to beat
^ Nice Way 2 Close IT...

Anyways

Nice Wordplay , Coo Punchlines.. Flow Wus On POINT!...
Multi's Was There.. Substance Was There...

Keep Em Comin ...

[PIRATEPRODUCTIONS]

nice, theres great wordplay involved and a lotta imagination but i think on the whole where pieces such as these always tend to lack is in poetics. flow is everything, even in a text rap you can add a feel that makes a line roll of so smoothly ya just like "hell yeh".....



On site! I`ll bomb Com`s to a slum, im fly major, like engaged phone lines.. u can try later
Illest lyrics miracle, high saviour, shoot the stars, claws in the clouds… lyrical skyscraper
Critical vibrator, got em shakin, its ma ritual to climb heights, fuck spiritual my minds right
Spittin darkest poetry its physical I blind nights, move so quick im only visible in hindsight


theze were sum nice lines, my fav in the piece...... but consider delivery as a form of incorporating you're ideas into a nice scheme & layout too so that the peoplez can see where ur headed and when to drop a punch, where.... seemed kind of in dis array when i read it but as it stands itz a nice keystyle just learn from wat u do and keep movin on

[Cee4]

uppin

[Def-init]

Solid drop man

"
Im crowned the most godly atheist coz no oddly faith exists, grab some tonic n im blazin
The path to glory, im on it n im chasin, racin, the decibels gone astronomic like inflation
Satanic reflections, its demonic what im facin, Cee 'takes out shit' like colonic irrigation
Words anabolic n im lacin, the mixture, drop after drop im a hit it's a fixture, im Hitler... "

Nice...

[HKX]

damn nigga dis piece is good shit think its one of da best I've read 4rm u dawg imma give it a fuckin 10 nigga cuz overall I think dis shit was fire no lie good shit wit da multies and da punchlines props