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Post by Young K »

A collab i'm doing with someone, i just keyed this up so don't expect much...lol


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Post by Mass Effex »

I was feelin' the beat, the vocals sounded clean, and the concept was good, but the lyrics were a little basic, and when it said KOOL in the low voice, you could've done more to make that sound better somehow. But this has good potential. Keep droppin 'em fam.
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Post by Kurse »

Not bad for a quick lil drop. That beat was cracc though...u gotta fuck wit more beats like that. It's had sum pimp-like swagger to it! lol I like those kinda jawns! Decent lil word play...i see you're doin yo thang kid. Keep pushin!
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Post by precise »

dope for somethin u threw together, i liked it, in my opinion ya gotta speak up a bit more tho sounds like ur kinda whisperin

overall, nice
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Post by Young K »

yea i don't know why it came out like that, i was screaming...lol...but i guess my voice is just soft or something, but i think it goes well with the chill beat...
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Post by Young K »

thanks homie appreciate it
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Post by Dead Silence »

beat was real mellow
dont like the voice effect in chorus

verse is legit
flow is good

nothing too much diff from ur other shit
but still good shit
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