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Post by Young K »

Recorded it a couple days ago, i think I'm getting better at mixing but what do i know...


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Post by Dead Silence »

real good stuff

i like that little intro u have

flow is up to par

lyrics were straight as usual
and ur emotion in it is real good

keep it up
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thanks fam appreciate it
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Post by Kurse »

Yea...the mixing is getting better. For sum reason (and I dunno if it's just me)...but the mixing toward the beginning of the song wasn't too bad, kinda solid. But then quality-mix wise...it sounded like it got a lil sloppier towards the end. (like i said...could be just me, I am a little tired right now so I'd have to give it another listen when I'm more attentive)

Lyrically alright, nuthin over the top. Didn't really feel it lyrically towards the end on that bridge. Beat was so/so.

I'd have to say 6/10
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thanks appreciate it
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Post by precise »

not bad, id still suggest turnin the volume up on ur verse, its not quite balanced out with the beat, not really the style of song i usually listen to, but u did an aright job, chorus was pretty decent u seem to have good creativity when it comes to layin down a track
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appreciate it
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