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THATS MY BOYS VERSE DONT REALLY KNOW HOW TO WRITE HIS VERSE OUT GOOD SO SORRY IF YOU CANT GET THE RHYTHM

[GUA-GUA]
Motivation drives me to stay patient, during this war of the new sensation/
we are tempted fools to get aggravated, over rap's dispute and altercation/
yet the demise of this game that holds our thoughts and pains/
drive me insane to the point where I point my finger to hint at who I blame/
everything still the same I got nothing to gain/
jus more anger to aim, shit that finger might as well be yelling my name/
cause I got the balls ya lack, ya got no courage ya niggas is wack/
I am true Hip-Hop fuck a theory I am the fact/
and fact of the matter is Gua-Gua gots that concept of a true crew that got his back/
assassins, serial, lyrical, killers with divine passion for the art of soul snatching/
we're Arising Servants responsible of Serving Apocalypse to this Surface/
thee Strongest Soldiers Inherited with Nothing but tools to Survive like voulters/
fear us like we some terrorists cause we bring terror to this era/
faced the devil many times so to my enemies I don't fear ya/
the reborn Jedi swinging pens like light sabers, raps our life so hip-hop's our lifesaver/
why don't you do us all a favor and take a sip of this chi-town flavor/
too strong wake up with a hangover body still hanging while your brain's tossed over/
feel the impact like a bulldozer can't understand the rush so get closer/
tense are the knots that form down your spine when you hear our tragic story/
so sense the glory comming off our page we Hip-Hops new blood the old got gory

[CONCEPT]
Filled up wit anxiety, sick of this patience trapped inside of me/
probably we'd get more honoree, if you sit back and follow me/
through the dark tunnels of struggles and pains/
the devil keeping us down we smuggled in chains/
crumbled ta shame, fall back stumble again/
thee experience advantaged me when the troubles became/
fought wars, only death one can save self from/
helpless one, pulling off his shelve was a gun/
Hip-Hop made him realize what life was about/
perpetrators stuck in the system livin in doubt/
livin without the mentality for reality/
we can settle this here pick up the mic and battle me/
actually I got no time to waste in this place/
times erased all your teachings been replace/
by the newest yet improved, crew, so two words first F then U/
made it through the underworld true, two emcees blew then grew into/
Assassins, Armed mics, Survived and Sacrificed/
All Souls Seeked Intrust Never back down in Strife/
Concept and Gua-Gua leaders of the hype/
lyrical miracle feed of the speech that I write/
we ignite, from a flame to a full fledged fire/
rised higher in the game then emcees I admire/
spit poetry, who wanna flow wit we/
its Judgment the way God said it was suppose ta be/
Shakespeare and 2Pac dead poets who inspired me/
and strengthened my philosophy, ta write literature and inquire thee/
start a record label name it Poets ta Society/
new blood, new breed, looked up in the sky thanked he/
cant nobody mess wit us lyrical assassins/
pick up the CD put it in ya stereo and blast it
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nice verses was feeling a couple lines and felt the overall concept-I got the poet relationship early but then it felt like you kept trying to hammer it in, that was the only thing that bugged me a little, but good verse
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