Miilz Vs KcKal (Miilz)

[Miilz]

5 Bars

Nameplay
Personal
Entertainment
Wordplay
Punchlines

Deadline 24 Hours After Check in
Due After Both Check in

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[KcKal]

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[Miilz]

[align=center]Kid im Flames-Rapping u Just a Lame-Faggot ill Get Rid Of cK Sorta Like Gang-Taggings
Why This Lil Fake-Acting? im Rippin-This-Child, Bitch Couldnt Bring "Heat" If He Was Switchin-Accounts
im Sick-Of-ya-Style, Hope This Hater-This-Dying ill Turn This "Ock Ta Gone" Like Paper-Designing
im Greater-And-Rising This Chumps a Thug-No Only Time "K Wanted" Is C's In Blood-Code
im Leavin ya Sonned-Cold But Fuck Ya Flow-Scrub My Verse "Harm Many" Sorta Like Bone-Thugs (Harmony)
Why u On Some Hoe-Stuff? Dont Bother-To-Play-With-Me Or You'll Get ya TOP SHOT Like a Modelin-Agency
i'll Properly-Rape-Ya-Keys Im Da Nicest-Teen My Mom? U Couldnt "Tear Her" ina Frighten-Scene
Stop Biting-Please Kid ya Shooked-On-The-Site u Couldnt Get a "Tie Son" if u Was Looking-For-Mic (Tyson)
Kid im Pushin-The-Fight But Dude Ya Squad-Blows Beat Me? U "Misheard" Like Lesbian Convos
But Bitch Stop-Bro cus ya Writtens-Ass Only "Kal" We Felt Was In Nutrition-Facts[/align]




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Tagging= Spray Painting
He Made Another Account Named "He@t", Drunken Jesus Checked His ip and Told Me.
Bloods Dont Write With C They Replace it With K.
Tear-Her/Terror
Kal Short For "calcium"

[KcKal]

All you can do is beef on my keystyle, and the name Kal, you must be a bitch in real life cause u even snitch in a freestyle///

C'mon dawg get wit-da-picture, you cant fuck-wit-deez-scriptures, I'm "flormaldahide" to your "wraps" like a MILL-i-yon "DIPPERS"// You wanted to battle me? I'll let you feel-da-pain, now ya-grillz-insane, from one shot to da mouf I "call it" cause I'm da real "MILLZ-lane"// You dont understand dat I'm da god-of-havoc, you should have declined da challenge, cause I'm givin ya "BLOOD" twice da spread of a thousand "DIAMONDS"!!//I'm da king of "RAPEIN" niggaz da nickname is "CRISCO", lets go!, dis niggaz pussy bandaged up so i rip him a new ASSHOLE!/// Speakin of gettin-RAPED, i got slugs-dat-PENATRATE, an admin's slave dat gets it where he done wit his DINNA PLATE, so before u fuckin rate an emcee like me, make sure you really know whos bitin on Lets Beef!


MILLZ-LANE= mills lane boxing ref.
BLOOD DIAMONDS= diamond trade in africa look it up

not dat creative but its da best i could do to not look like a biter.

[drunken jesus]

Nameplay - Millz
Personal - Millz
Entertainment - Millz
Wordplay - Millz
Punchlines - Millz

millz had some iffy lines but it was a clean sleep, kckal why you dashing off words that aren't multis?

[Cee4]

cat sweep to Millz

Kal wasnt bad but just got outclassed on every cat
Millz was more good than fantastic. he has a clever structure that allows him to get 8 punchlines out of 8 lines. problem is some were a bit generic and a couple of the wordplays were forced but on the whole it a good verse

VOTE MILLZ by a bit

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Category Swipe To Millz..his lines hit much harder.....kc you could use elevation..you gave attention around irrelevant words by putting apostrophe marks