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New Kurse & A.M.E.

Post by Kurse »

That's right, we over here at A.M.E. are always doin our mixxtape thang...so I figured I'd drop one for y'all to listen too and lemme know whut ya think of it. So kick back, relax and hopefully enjoy. Oh yea...Demented Dick...don't think shits gonna be left un-said...I got sum shit for ur retarded ass...so you'll be hearing from me soon. Weak-ass wannabe emcee...you need a hobby!

This track is me...VIRAL, KASPER & JOE JILLA aka JAI-QUE
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Post by Viral »

bout time u post dis shit!...lol...yeah everyone give a listen n leave feedback...itd be greatly appreciated
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Post by complexity »

I liked Kurses verse. some nice wordplay, etc.
No real reservations.

Kasper -. Has a good voice for rap. And
steady flow. Something is missing though. I
can't tell though. Lyrics were pretty decent.

Viral. Used his crazy rhyme scheme. A good flow.
The lyrics were a little hard to follow though.

Jilla -. I assume has a lot of experience.
Lyrics weren't amazing. Kinda sounds like you
threw on a mainstream rapper at the end. Lol.

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Post by drunken jesus »

kurse - nice verse
casper - alright verse dude needs more charisma though
viral - nice verse its hard to understand some of it though
gilla - alright verse sounds like hes trying to sound like hes from the south or something though
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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Post by Viral »

precise seemed to be able to understand my verse pretty damn well...lol i think u guys jst have hearing problems..hahaha...but thanks for the feedback...hopefully we can get some more from the lazy asses...lol
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Post by drunken jesus »

i understood most've it the beat drowned you out a few times though
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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Post by Invincible »

it's good nice beat
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