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Well as you all pretty much know, I've been working on another street album, "INSOMNIA", that's due to release soon...but on the side I've also been doing other songs for my first full length LP titled, "The Honest Truth" This particular album is produced by Drunken Jesus and I (for the mostpart), with the exception of a few productions from a couple of other producers who care to get their sound out. But mainly this is the project that I'll be pushing in summer of '09, and attempting to market into the stores.

This is one of the songs from that album. It's called "House Party". Now if you've ever been to a House Party...and I mean a REALLLL ONE (not one where your parents are upstairs making you popcorn)...then you know what to expect and what the scenary is like. This song is about Me being the host of your local house party, just giving you a tour through the crib and tryin to be in the "pursuit of happiness" (we'll call it)...with a lucky lady! It's a more lively, semi-club oriented song with a latin twist of instruments and influence, along with a slight "T-Pain-like" vocal effect on the hook, just to try sumthin different and give it a more "clubbish" feel. This joint was produced by me, and it's sole purpose is to be used as a party track or a radio single. I hope you enjoy.

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[align=center]"House Party"
Kurse
Album: The Honest Truth
Written By: R. Bueno
Mixed By: R. Bueno
Produced By: R. Bueno
Recorded @ B1-Studio in Joliet, IL
Anger Manij'ment Entertainment Inc.
All Rights Reserved 2008 ©
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Post by Dead Silence »

this is pretty good

dont like the chorus
or the t-pain effect

it doesnt seem to have that like party excitement in it
i think that is mostly because of the beat.

lyrics were good
flow was good

overall-7/10
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[font=Georgia]Eh...Dis Joint Is Kindah...Hmm..How Can I Put This..The Lyrics Was Str8 Up Lyke A House Party Feel But Da Beat Didn't Match

Plus Da Hook You Disguised It Perfectly Cuz I Couldnt Tell It Had Tha T-Pain Effect

Soundclick Has Some Pretty Hot Club Beats Jus' Ta Letchu Know

But Uh..Wasn't Feelin' Dis 1 Too Much Fam

Yuh Lyrics Was On Point As Well As Yuh Flow But I Think Da Beat Is What Made This Track Kindah Uqhh..

7.5/10

Keep Doin' You Doe Fam

But I Wouldn't Put This On Yuh Album If I Was You, Jus' A Heads Up
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Post by MagicMark »

dude.. no joke.. if you ever want help writing a track i could give you some advice... thats the only area your lackin' in imo.. dont get me wrong.. there written well.. but generally there's no real spark that sets top artists apart..

get at me..
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Post by El Original »

this would of sounded better over a reggaeton beat, but nice drop man 7/10
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Post by Onediversekid »

Kurse, this is definitely one of my favorites from you. So get your ass on Msn and send it to me.
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Post by HKX »

good shit my nigga another banger lol chuch u got off wit da beat i remember when i heard da unfinished version of it lol
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Post by Kurse »

I know...most forum kats really ain't feelin club-like, lively songs. Everytime I drop that kinda shit here they land up not liking it! haha
They like real underground shit.
Like whenever I drop that real realative-type shit, they dig it.
But whenever I switch it up it's like NOOOOOOOOOOO...lol

I don't care. I like doin different shit and not keepin it the same.

I sent this shit to DJ TimBuck2 at WGCI this weekend, hopefully they'll have it bumpin on GO-ILL radio at the 9PM hour sometime in the next few weeks. But I'll get word of it if it does.
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Post by drunken jesus »

beats a lil too fast you don't sound as comfortable as usual, and imo the beat doesn't really work as a club jumpoff

verses are aight, you seem to rush a few parts that throws off the rhythm mainly because like i said the beats too fast, hooks solid i can't even hear the autotune though, i think it'd sound alot better with a phaser on it panning it from side to side, verses could've used some adlibs
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by Viral »

this songs pretty tight..i like it..i will say tho..that sounds like a flanger..cuz da notes in ur voice aint maxin out like auto-tune does...it sounds just like a flanger..or flangus...not sure.....but if u did use auto tune..then..i dunno..dats weird..but good shit mayne...we gotta get down on dis club shit i been workin on...get at me about it
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Post by - Mutual - »

i gotta be honest i liked this shit
nice on point lyrics spit well to the beat
i liked the chorus but then i like songs that either have a layted back slower style or sumin like this more up beat shit more my style
kurse keep doin ya thang i was really feelin this one
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