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State of Urgency

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Riposte (red)

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Merry marriages, between the government and terrorists,
Presidential parodies prepare to tear-up families,
Promise fantasies, promote factories,
To pay, they'll place a tax on trees, till you have to break your back in half to help your family breath, please… at 18 I'm forced to sign the draft, don't make me laugh,
If that crap, ever comes to pass, Canada best expect my ass,

They keep a lot under wraps; see I know plenty of facts, like how they've bathed,
A scientist in aid, so he could dig a way at a way, to erase, half of Africa with aids,
So we can mine there resources, look this shit's absorbed in books, don't believe me?
Pick one up, America's shook, most these politicians are crooks.

On any known day, they'll spend a thousand a day, to keep their family at bay,
There's kid's starving, and they could give a fuck if they're saved.
I know they'll say they do, paint lies, make em sound real sweet,
Bet when shit hits the fan, we can, expect em to leave hell for the week-end, to pack in a suite.





These facts can decieve, no matter how many times the track's on repeat,
with acts comes a fee, they tell us we're free and then we're taxed from beneath,
religious law attacks on beliefs, freedom redefined now it's scratched from the sheet,
governments suffocating so i'm askin to breathe, but they ignore issues and put me back in the streets,

Consistent misconceptions leading to these yearly conspiracy theories,
inconvenience to society proving that they're clearly a series,
so obvious even the ignorant can see its common sense despite what knowledge is,
but its nothing more than another story to cover in the life of politics,

They can hide what they want but we know they speak of lies,
with ties and a front, it can only show a weak disguise,
behind the assumptions is a suit with humanly flaws as a sign of corruption,
it's to remind us of somethin, that they'll be our demise at the time of destruction,
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Post by Haz »

Pretty Straight Lil Collab you Guys Had Goin On


Rip I Liked your Part, Pointed Out alot Of things.
Liked How u Said if Push Comes To Shove Canada Betta Take you
I Mean you Brought Topics To the Table & ya Verse Felt Like a Letter To Society type Shit.

Ekoms your's Was Coo, In Ways i Didnt Like it Seems like you jus Wrote words To Rhyme , Didnt have Impact in your Verse ... I Dunno Wouldnt Say It Was terrible jus Wouldn't Say It's Up To Standards...

Anyways Rip Kill't The collab.
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hm, i reduced my usual rhymes in this to make it less rap-like sicne riposte is more of a poet, its mainly just a political message to put out, definitely not up to my standards in rhymescheme and lyrics, but there'll be more collabs of me and riposte in the future for a change of scenery, appreciate the feed tho
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yeah great feed. look for us in the future.
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Post by Haz »

Na Ekoms i Seen That,
what i'm Sayin it Just didn't Seem to Be Real.
Seemed like you jus Wrote Those lines To Put them together
i Get the Political MEssage that Was obvious but i Wasn't Feeling it ( Not the Political Veiw) jus how ya Verse was.
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alright i get wat u mean(sorta), uppin for more feed
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Wow that blue ink hurt my eyes.
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thanks for the feed?
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Post by eMCee Havic »

sick Ripostei like the content of yours the most its that poetic shit has a good spoken word feelin to it, that canada better expect my ass was great, simple but put together well

ekoms
yo man its nice to see you change up the style, good shit man, i'd like to see more shit from you like this
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Word. Thanks for the feed everyone

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Post by FlipSide »

Word i like this topic a lot.... Ive read books on how society is controlled by government and most politicians themselves are also puppets.... hungry puppets...and most of the rest are on power trips... I like to see those views expressed.... and put in a message, sometimes its not about how many wordplay's multies and punches u can fit.. Its how much weight u can put on eact message u send...and i feel that this was delivered well.. by both tho i never seen ekoms or write anything.... vNice over all drop... tho i see u wrote this in 08? wtf.....
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Yeah son haha. I joined this shit in 06 I have been writting for about 8 years now

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Post by QwarterZ »

Yooooooooo..........this was dope

you didn't do it for teh lulz

either way this was purdy cool, the style was purdy awkward
well the way it was written, when I see rip write it's different
which is cool, and I don't think I ever read anything from Ekoms?
but he did good too, mirrored the style Rip went in with....I think?
either way, a very nice political view my infant
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