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Post by Brah-Vo »

Just a little somethin' to keep you guys interested. Yeah quality still sucks. Cut the hook from somewhere else so it didn't sound completely lame.
First verse is written
First half of second verse is written, rest is freestyle. You can tell where i start.
Quality still sucks but yeah. Just a little sommin sommin before i record my new stuff (with better wquality :) )
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up!
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Post by HKX »

beat was dope i 4got who murked dat beat i like da song they did 2 dat beat, ur mixin like u said was bad vocals were high, sometimes u went low like u backed away 4rm da mic, ur lyrics r good tho, 1 thing i didn't like bout ur track is dat da way it paused and than da hook come in u should've put da hook in right after da verse was done and than vice versa wit da next verse, overall dis track was good u did fall off on sum of da parts but u picked up where u fell off which is good, keep droppin dawg
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thanks for the feed my dude!
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Post by Yung_Flow »

[font=Georgia]Shit Was Dope
Dat Beat Is Dope
Yuh Vocals Were High Like X Said But Itz Aight
Im Feelin' Dat Beat Doe..Is There Anyway You Can Send It Ta Me
Cuz I Have Some Real-Life Story Tellin' Shit 2 Dat
Lemme Kno Fam..
But I Was Feelin' It

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Keep Droppin'

.UnO.[/font]
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Post by Viral »

beat was cool...ur vocals were way too loud....couldnt really hear the beat as well once u started spittin....lyrics were tight....i noticed ur mic distorted..u should try being farther..or usin a pop filter of some sort..wether it be ghetto rigged like kurse used to have..lol..or a real one...keep doin ur thing man
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Post by Lotus »

you gotta nice flow... deep lyrics too.

i'd say jus put a lil more emotion into the lyrics

flow was a lil off in a few parts, prolly due to not havin enough rehearsal though. good shit man
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