Cant Sleep AGAIN!!!!!!

[EvilJoey]

Just Sat Down and started Typing... this is what happened.



do u Fear no one feels what ur sayin …And Ur Whole Collection is worthless?
Were I sit and just question the purpose
Welcome to my section of the circus
Were self reflection is worthless..
Armed with these weapons ta merk this
Constantly Layin Infections in verses
Cuasing

Dyslexic abortions Kill the moms… And save the babies
Rap ...didn't make me Crazy.. Shit it gave me Rabies..
Whole lists of people I put in graves and made lay with daisies..
No one could Save This 80s baby.....Going to Hell?
Ill get My own day and a parade in Hades

The Demons in my Ears have been Screamin For years…
There Schemin is Clear...there Dreamin of Bringin me Tears..
Wasn't till now that I know meanin of Fear.

They told me the Cure to my Post Traumatic Stress
Was a dose of Rabbit Flesh...
So Im in the Pet store ...cuz ur supposed to grab it fresh…
But there Out of rabbits and bunnies.. But there was a kitten
so I grabbed its funny .....I admit it ...out of Habit I bit it … Its Yummy
But who doesn't eat pussy… My Tongues got the recipe…
Its Gum drops of Ecstasy …. My mom Scream No Son Stop Molestin me
Fuck this Rhyme…..The Rest of it's Nonsense..
I was just kidding I don't have an…Edipus Complex
Im just So Curious…. why ud take joe so serious…
His Flows mysterious… This Dro is Furious...im so Delirious..

We all have Asperations to Make it
No body knows the size of weight that we hold on are back..
Shit I been patiently Waitn to Explode on a track
Like a Bomb on the side of a road in Iraq.

Call the hospital im not pretendin….. I intend on sendin em Victims
As soon as I can find the guy.... i was intendin on Rippin.!!!!!!
If he went to get Friends... tellem to bring 10 of them with him
Street Pharmacy Pennin Prescriptions… I should end this addiction
Shit dosn't make sense like when I got suspended for Skippin..
Memories of my wife are Just Her Pretendin And Bitchin
I think my death will start with a knife and my life will End in the Kitchen…

But not like that… More like From the Cops With tecs and Shotties
When the Swat Breaks in to Collect the Bodies
The Flesh I ate and used the Rest for Hobbies
Just Spleens and Hearts.. Random parts and Scaps...
Just the Stuff I Use for Arts and crafts..
Cant explain the Evil.. id need charts and graphs…
Its Hard to Laugh.. When ur hearts turnd Black
Questioning evil ? That's like askin why Sharks attack!!!!

[Brah-Vo]

Holy crap dude!
This ish was dope as hell man!
I dont even know who you are but i was most deffo feelin this ish.
Man mad props bro.

This line was sick:
No one could Save This 80s baby.....Going to Hell?
Ill get My own day and a parade in Hades

keep droppin.

[Lotus]

damn bro thats sick lyricism. literally lol... some twisted shit but overall the style seems rele similar to eminem, what with the crazy multies that connect so well.

Just Spleens and Hearts.. Random parts and Scaps...
Just the Stuff I Use for Arts and crafts..
Cant explain the Evil.. id need charts and graphs…
Its Hard to Laugh.. When ur hearts turnd Black
Questioning evil ? That's like askin why Sharks attack!!!!

def my fav part.

[eMCee Havic]

yo that was dope wordplay and rhyming

i give it a 8-10

my favorite part

do u Fear no one feels what ur sayin …And Ur Whole Collection is worthless?
Were I sit and just question the purpose
Welcome to my section of the circus
Were self reflection is worthless..
Armed with these weapons ta merk this
Constantly Layin Infections in verses

yeah it was good

[Dynamiq]

i liked the rhymescheme in this def..prolly one of the best drops i've seen on here lately..you have the potential to be a good topical writer as well which i think you should try to develop into...keep at it man

7/10

[TreTru]

yo that was hott..straight up I feel that flow style too...right up my alley on that one...lots of sock similes and multi's nice

I was feelin this part for sure...

The Demons in my Ears have been Screamin For years…
There Schemin is Clear...there Dreamin of Bringin me Tears..
Wasn't till now that I know meanin of Fear.

and this rhyme caught my eye cause I'm on that level ....

We all have Asperations to Make it
No body knows the size of weight that we hold on are back..
Shit I been patiently Waitn to Explode on a track
Like a Bomb on the side of a road in Iraq.



yeah nice drop..

[The Gonz]

Joe brought the heat! Don't worry dog, plenty more sleepless nights to come!

[Cee4]

yeah i liked this right here. was kinda like a twisted version of Nas Book of Rhymes the way it was stop start. it was a bit difficult to catch what was goin on in places but overall a good read. the flow was smooth and the wordplay was decent. overall a good piece with originality. props