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lyrical murder

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i Murdered the alphabet A through Z
even the hardest of detectives couldnt handle the scene
rampaging through dreams speech blunt and ubscene
my victims are biting rappers weapons a guiliteen
and im here with a sicle to reap the overindulgent
stoning their rhymes with engine componants
fuck oppoinants i wrote it to throw em outa composer
a smoker i light fiends up in small enclosers
hide your kids away cuz i reek of deathly odors
i carry deadly orders that make american's rush the borders
its lyrical murder fixed up into a fresh burger
fresh served up to merk a false precurser
words are weapons and the prejection is a deep depression
so i gather up confessions and unleash a brand new session
and the lesson is based purely off of human agression
with all the unmentioned vyin for all yall attention
so get your kids safe, hide um deep in the attic
my action's tramatic turning people from preachers to addicts
im insane n evil confiscatin the brains of people
their strains were meagle so i strained the issue
humbled the humbless without wielding pistols
so gather your confidence for others i offer death
cause ever since the evidence was evident of precedence
ive represent true hip hop ressonance even when the pencil sits
how much longer can i press this shit cause unless its gets
better how the fuck am i sapose to let it sit



Dedicated to all the signed rappers who rap like shit
you oppisit you dont desserve hip hop so stop your spits
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Post by eMCee Havic »

feed is appreciated

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Ok ok

Post by EvilJoey »

See now im Feelin this more the last one...

I mean.. this is just more me..


Over all Flow was on point... i didnt think the ...offer death / guiliteen
lines Rhymed well enough but again with real word play mabey.

But other than those 2 words i liked it alot.
More complex for than ur last post for sure...

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cause ever since the evidence was evident of precedence
ive represent true hip hop ressonance even when the pencil sits
how much longer can i press this shit cause unless its gets
better how the fuck am i sapose to let it sit

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