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Goon To A Goblin FreeStyle

Post by SiccSpitz »

Thanks To Trackbangas For The Beat...

Ummm..Idk?
A FreeStyle On This Track Lol

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Post by HKX »

dawg u sound like Lil Wayne on dis shit dis was decent I jus didn't like how u sounded like wayne lol unless if dats how u sound but da mixin was aight vocals where a lil 2 high in my opinion nice lil freestyle I was expectin a full length track imma have 2 give u a 7/10 homie keep droppin nigga 1
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Thanks.

An Na. I Have Like 50 Different Styles.

Lol.

Bkut Na It Was Some Quicc Thing.
Ill Upload A Full Song For You All Some Other Time.

Thanks For The Feed Tho. Up.
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Post by Brah-Vo »

This was pretty ill Liked listenin to it. Sounds majorly like Wayne, but thats alright.
Beat was sick and u stayed on point. I wanna see a written track from u. Pretty Koo man.
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Thanks Bkro.

Ill Def Do That For U.

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Post by - Mutual - »

man this was dope
n yeah ya was alot like weezy but it seemed to work well
the beat was pretty good
the lyrics were straight
keep'em comin dude
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Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
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I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
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Post by Viral »

it was a good freestyle...just not feelin that lil wayne-ness..haha..def would like to hear an actual song from ya tho...keep doin u
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Post by Kurse »

Same. Not much else that I can say other than what everyone else has already stated.
So with that being said...I guess I don't need to say who you sound like you carry influence from. haha But it's all good.

It's sumthin different, and it definately makes for a change of pace around here. Definately keep droppin bruh!
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

Your a fucking wayne stan arent u @ siccspits..
No hate..
Shit was whack man
not everybody is meant to rap come hard or go home
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Lol

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^...>Thanks. Bkro...I Guess.?

Lol..

Bky The Way, This Was Something Really. Wayne-Ish.
Like U All Noticed.
Bkut Ull ALSO Notice On Other Songs I Drop On Here.Im more East Coast Then Anything.

So Just Watch An Wait.

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Lol..Thanks For The Feed Everybkody.

Ill Drop Soon Another One
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Post by Lawgix »

damn man... i ain't a wayne fan at all... maybe older wayne... but newer shit sucks... ur lyrics were nice man... beat u chose was cool... liked how you did pull off the wayne style but i mean thats easy... thats pretty much simplistic rhyming right there... i like rhyming that takes a challenge to write... and spit... this was a good track... and whats up with you doin Bk in words that start with B?? kinda hard to read lol... like I'mma Bke Bkack.... lol not pokin fun just wanna know...
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Post by TreTru »

I heard it..I like weezy's rhythm imo if you try
new shyt you'll never level up..I like the beat
and you pulled off the weezy thing pretty good..

decent track for doin it on your own.def.If this really
was a one take freestyle im impressed
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