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Post by complexity »

ITS NOT SUPPOSE TO BOTHER YOU.

We are telling you how to get better. Thats why you drop!

Anyway. You sound even more stupid saying that your friends are so "cool" that they don't even get on the internet or something?
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He really does.
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Typeo wrote:hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahaha

Dude, I've lived in both the south and north and been to the east and west,
^^^^oh so youve sucked dicks all over the map then huh? goofy hyena on nitrous lookin ass with ya laughin takin up half a page
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facin me? its mission impossible, like pickin up lesbian broads
fuck all these thespian frauds, they "bug me" like espionage
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PrecisE wrote:
Typeo wrote:hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahaha

Dude, I've lived in both the south and north and been to the east and west,
^^^^oh so youve sucked dicks all over the map then huh? goofy hyena on nitrous lookin ass with ya laughin takin up half a page
This coming from the guy who uses spoons to ream out his boyfriends ass before he licks it clean.

really now, you're one pathetic shit, please. Unless you have something or some way to do anything that is you know, of substince, then shut up. You make me sad.
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Ok For a Start This is Illest lyrics not a Bitch Fest. Drunken you always claim to have the best feedback fuck That * Is English Your First language? * You Tell me How Is That Going To Make Him Improve And Pick Up From His Mistakes?
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..Fuck that gay shit you say on a beat..
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HaZard That Wasnt Bad Man Just keeping Doing Your Thing peace
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SequencE wrote:Ok For a Start This is Illest lyrics not a Bitch Fest. Drunken you always claim to have the best feedback fuck That * Is English Your First language? * You Tell me How Is That Going To Make Him Improve And Pick Up From His Mistakes?
i've told him numerous times what hes doing wrong, tom has told him numerous times, i'm not going to break apart every single verse and tell him what hes doing wrong because i've done that enough already he doesn't get the point, he'd rather just continue to write in broken english

i do leave good feedback unless i just skim through shit, tom and 16 have both improved in the past 6 months and my feedback was probably partially responsible, i told them what they were doing wrong they got the point and they worked on their weaknesses and got better, it took 20 different explanations just for hazard to get the link rule figured out, i'm not going to tell him what hes doing wrong every single time cause he doesn't get the point cause he thinks his verses are ill already but they're not
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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