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Round Block Da Flow-Meet-Park
On Extra Grind Like Tony Hawk/
Moves Made "Excercise My Rights"
Cruise Cake "Undressin The White"/
Blunts Restin At Site Smoked Ya brainz
Pumpz Blessed Wit Might Go Till Rain/
Grandpas Approach The "Caine"
I-V Patientz Control Each Vain/
Hit Me Up Give Um Smack "eat Pain"
Like Steel Trains Goin Ova ya "Knees-strained"/
Holdin ya Self Back , Bold Wit Melt Crack
"solid Ground" Sold Nicks Wrapped/
Hazard Enviroment A Bastard Desirement
Leave The Sun Tired Kid Know Im Jus fire Lit/
Pliers Gripped "Handle-Whats-Runnin"
Feel Tha Heat Like a Candle-Thats-Touchin/
Let them Typeo Death-Is-The-Key
Speakin To Me i'll Leave You Reckliss-Wit-Teeth/
Ya Neckliss Will Bleed Sexes Jus Need
A Cock "Pussy" Blastid Away/
U Alwayz Around Diick Call ya Self Magnum
This Way u Can b A "Rappa-Today!!"/
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Post by complexity »

dude, im starting to think your not forcing multis or rhymes, your just thinking that what your saying makes sense man, it doesnt

"Hit Me Up Give Um Smack "eat Pain"
Like Steel Trains Goin Ova ya "Knees-strained"/ "

eat pain? come on man, you can do better then this

"Speakin To Me i'll Leave You Reckliss-Wit-Teeth/
Ya Neckliss Will Bleed Sexes Jus Need "

Your wreckless with teeth? um interesting

"your necklace will bleed"?
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Yea .. Dey Flow Garbage When Come Out
"reckless Wit Teeth"... All About Ice "They Neckliss Will Bleed"- Tru Color

Yea Eat Pain "Give Um Da Smack" "Smack"-Word
Fa Substance .. "Eat Pain" Like U Got Smacked Aiight Den ..
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is english your first language?
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Best i Seen From u Yet. Delivery Could Be improved, Keep Droppin ur Gettin Better.
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AKA SCOTCH HALL, MOE MEIJER & MOMEIJAH.
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Post by Haz »

Yea English Is My Firs Language ..
I Use Slang But Dats Jus How it Is .. Aiight
Good Lookin Domino
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Post by Typeo »

Its not really slang, its just you trying to make shit up to act like you have a slang. Its like when ebonix first came out. Good luck to you on your own language.

Plus, some of the shit dosn't rhyme even if you force it, much of it dosn't hold substance. It is as if you are working on writing filler.
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.... U Dont Kno Slang Round Hea So Why
Dont U Stop Assumin u Think Everythin Revolves
Around One Thing .. N Most Of That Does Rhyme
U Should Jus Read Betta .. N I Seen Ya Shit
If You Honestly Think Your Good You Need Reality
Check Ur A Chump Man Come On Now
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Post by Typeo »

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahaha

Dude, I've lived in both the south and north and been to the east and west, I've learned slangs from here to aussy. You think I don't know slang? Man, please, stop your own god damn assumptions.

You have no say in who you think is good or not; one, you can't write worth a god damn, two, you have Lloyd Banks....he had one good cd, decent freestyler, then he does complete shit for his second...Please....shhhhhhh
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drunken jesus wrote:is english your first language?
hahahahashhsidhasldhahaahhahahaha
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Post by drunken jesus »

lmfao

i lived in philly, chicago, san francisco, & houston YOU DO NOT USE SLANG lmao wtf words are you saying are slang doggy? you use regular words you just don't make sense with them
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by Haz »

I Bin Around 2 Nigga Dont Worry Bout It If u Dont Kno it Why Say It Dont Make Sense lol U Jus
Dont Know Hope Off My Dick Already Typeo Soo
Hard On it lol
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-.HaZarD.- wrote:I Bin Around 2 Nigga Dont Worry Bout It If u Dont Kno it Why Say It Dont Make Sense lol U Jus
Dont Know Hope Off My Dick Already Typeo Soo
Hard On it lol
'don't worry bout it if you don't know it why say it don't make sense'

ex-fucking-actly.

Do as you say dumbass.

And no, if I was 'on your dick', that would mean I like you. Good job switching shit up horribly.
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Post by complexity »

nobody on the internet besides you has ever said this

http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&sa=X ... 22&spell=1

reckless with teeth

http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&sa=X ... 22&spell=1
http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&lr=& ... tnG=Search

handle whats running

http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&lr=& ... tnG=Search

approach the caine

http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&lr=& ... tnG=Search

Flow meet park

http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&sa=X ... 22&spell=1

Undressing the white - one person said it, not in your weird context though

http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&lr=& ... tnG=Search

go till rain - two people said that in seperate sentences they put them words together

http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&lr=& ... tnG=Search

sold nicks wrapped

http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&lr=& ... tnG=Search

Candle thats touching

http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&lr=& ... tnG=Search

Bastard Desirement


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So basically the whole verse was some weird shit that you made up that sounded retarded as hell. I didn't even go through it all. Just enough to make every line you dropped look more stupid.

http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&lr=& ... tnG=Search

Just Chilling - see, thats slang 440,000 results.

Are you saying the people who talk your language. Don't use the internet?
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No .. But Dere Not Internet Geeks Who USe Internet Slang In Da Firz Place So??
I dont Care You Can Pick Apart Every Lil Thing
Do u lol It Dont Botha Me Man Trust Me
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