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Post by complexity »

yo counselor, i really think we should end this here
how can I make this sentence clear
i've been trapped in this "vicious cycle" for endless years
my brain operates in the "right hemisphere"
why do you write, you don't have the sense to hear?
you don't know? Vincent van Gogh might have lent an ear
i fear because that pen is near
why? because that is how I end careers
do you like seeing men with tears?
as a child were you a friendless queer?
let me speak Ian, as a youth were you subject to relentless smeers?
when you made your entrance were you met with seemingly senseless snears?
I'll tell you how i remember peers, they stabbed me in the back literally
physically, i want to revenge them years
i know what makes them tick like Engineers
Ian this isn't one of your lyrical sessions
don't you have any spiritual direction?

when Sherri died, I lost faith in miracles and blessings
she was killed quicker than a bacterial infection
speaking on this material is stressing
this shit feels fucking surreal addressing
this isn't who wants to be a millionare, so change the question
Ian don't you see this is brain digestion?
listen faggot, if you keep the same direction
i'll jump out my seat quicker than a plane ejection
pick up that pen, and give you vein injections
fine, Ian, remain upset then
you can leave, and once again blame rejection
it seems you and pain have a strange connection
in life all you can do is change perception
this isn't one of your writtens, you can't have the same perfection
I know that you crave acceptance
metaphorically speaking, its making you a slave in essence
I've seen your resume and you have made successes
come back again, and we'll see how your rage progresses
I'll subscribe you
...wait a second! I'm not the patient type
I might waste a night and take you to a vacant sight
tie you up and ask why you hate your life
I notice, that your face is bright
are you afraid? i might throw a chair in this place?
how about if I throw it square in your face
I'll bet you want to go the hell home
oh well, who are you calling that is a dead cellphone
I knew that you would piss me off, that's why i got this gun
I should probably tell you not to run
I never shot this one, Ian..you don't want to do this bullshit
actually I do, that is why i brought this full clip
I'm sick of faggots trying to give me therapy
do you get your rocks off when you embarrass me?
you're not helpless, I'm trying to help you ian
can you hear yourself
, yes faggot, I'm screaming
trying to give myself a reason to squeeze this gat
Ian you still have your freedom, you can leave with that
I want to shoot this but..
you don't have the guts? you stupid fuck! (boom)
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Post by Arvincible »

Damn plex, u really bringing back the true meaning of the scriptures, im tired of the stupid disses and shit, I know I was apart of it myself but I miss the originality and this piece is a great example of it.


Therapist vs patient

Looks like plex wanted to kill someone messing with his head in reality lol nah really the concept is real fresh and I find it very difficult to pull of but u got it through man.

The multis are amazing as usual and I liked the van gogh allusion becuase u related ur greatness..umm I thought the therapist was a prick as well like I told u, I would've killed him myself lol

Good piece very captivating

9.5/10
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Post by - Mutual - »

shit this piece was dope
had a lot of feeling
u puled it off great
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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