MY AUDIO...

-ViP · Post by **-ViP** » Tue Aug 05, 2008 5:51 am

This is Something That I've Done A Couple of Months Ago, I Just Sharing it With Ya'll Because I Want The Feed Back And A Lil Preview, Because I'ma Be Droppin Audios Dissin Niggas. You Know.

-MiiLz. · Post by **-MiiLz.** » Tue Aug 05, 2008 11:23 am

Nice Track Even Though i Already Heard it ..You Defiantly Showed Tha Haters That Your not Trash At Audios.

Dead Silence · Post by **Dead Silence** » Tue Aug 05, 2008 12:39 pm

sounds familiar. DK who. but it does

ne ways.

Flow is on Keyy

Lyrics are a little sloppy.

Ur Presence on the mic isnt up to par.

overall

8/10

(even tho we beefin. i give honest feed.)

-ViP · Post by **-ViP** » Tue Aug 05, 2008 12:55 pm

Dead Silence wrote:sounds familiar. DK who. but it does

ne ways.

Flow is on Keyy

Lyrics are a little sloppy.

Ur Presence on the mic isnt up to par.

overall

8/10

(even tho we beefin. i give honest feed.)

I'm Not Sure if Your Tryna Act Cool Just Koss Your Dreams Of Being an Operator Finally Came True, But Alright Man, And I Hope You Aint Tryna Say That, That shit Aint My Audio. My Lyrics is Sloppy But They Better Then Yours Right?

Dead Silence · Post by **Dead Silence** » Tue Aug 05, 2008 1:38 pm

im not saying its not you.
im just sayin u sound like someone here on illest. not sure who. but u do.

and why do u gotta take feed so serous?

-ViP · Post by **-ViP** » Tue Aug 05, 2008 1:49 pm

Alright Then My Bad, I Thought You Was Being Sarcasm And Tryna Play Games But its Cool

-MiiLz. · Post by **-MiiLz.** » Tue Aug 05, 2008 1:53 pm

Dang ..Next To My Track ..one Of The Best Audios i Heard On This Site..LOL j/k its Tight

-TraMaTiK- · Post by **-TraMaTiK-** » Wed Aug 06, 2008 3:24 am

peepin it now.

verse1 - not bad towards the middle of ur verse tho it seemed like a few lines were forced,like u had to rush em b4 the nezt bar so work on that.

verse2 - flowed better then the first verse to me.

only thing i think ur lackin is emotion. u have some but put more emphasis into ur ad-libs and shit. like after that one line ur like 'neverr' no be like 'NEVERRRRRRR' show ppl u mean it,ya kno?[and make sure the ad-libs arent louder then ur actual verse cuz a few times it seemed like they were]

lyrics were decent.

beat was cool tho. keep droppin. [and to answer ur callout,no i cant battle as much as i wanna cuz i wont be around much anymore]

Subsist · Post by **Subsist** » Wed Aug 06, 2008 4:34 am

beat's very good. lyrics are straight. emotion and presence is very good. your flow is good but its choppy at parts.

overall
good track.. you need to work on perfecting your flow in every track and you need someone to produce your tracks cause production sucks.
good luck

- Mutual - · Post by **- Mutual -** » Wed Aug 06, 2008 4:38 am

beats pretty straight the lyrics were straight
i can honestly say it's betta than my audios
emotion and ya prescence on the track were pretty good
overall dope track was a good listen

iLLrated · Post by **iLLrated** » Wed Aug 06, 2008 11:55 pm

yea this joint aint bad the no cake line was coo, sum of your adlibs at places made things seem a lil off, maybe its just me none the less pretty solid overall

-ViP · Post by **-ViP** » Thu Aug 07, 2008 7:37 am

Thanks For The Feed,

HKX · Post by **HKX** » Thu Aug 07, 2008 9:20 am

shit is not bad u should drop more audios asap homie keep them fuckers comin dawg

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