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The illest Bruhh (????? Diss)
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it wasnt bad had a nice flow but the 2nd verse was better um i wasnt really feelin the hook but the beat was okay as usual
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
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Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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For the hook...
...it was done too simple. It's okay if it's repeatative, alot of hook's are. But they have to be catchy if u want it to have impact.
Versus weren't too bad. Fell off a little here and there, I was just suprised to hear a Hazard and Subsist diss. haha Who knows...one of them might respond. I don't see it goin unanswered though.
Wasn't very found of the beat either to be honest. Overall I'd have to give this one a 4/10. But keep at it pimpin.
...it was done too simple. It's okay if it's repeatative, alot of hook's are. But they have to be catchy if u want it to have impact.
Versus weren't too bad. Fell off a little here and there, I was just suprised to hear a Hazard and Subsist diss. haha Who knows...one of them might respond. I don't see it goin unanswered though.
Wasn't very found of the beat either to be honest. Overall I'd have to give this one a 4/10. But keep at it pimpin.
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