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Second recording (freestyle)

Post by J-Majikk »

ok this is the second thing i recorded so far. its a freestlye. the beat is also mine. pleas e leave plentty of comments good or bad. id apreciate it if u gave me tipe on how to improve sound quality. oh and once again im higher than the ozone right now lol.

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Post by MagicMark »

vocals are a nice level... beat is a little drowned out... which is a shame cause the beat is pretty hot..

this was a freeverse im near certain lol, not a freestyle.. on that note lyrics are okay... some good lines, definately had the freestyle air, which is a style i like..

overall, id say turn the beat volume up a lil, so it kinda plays off ya vocals... other than that i have no complaints quality wise,

id like to see you put out a track like a song with verses and a hook, see how that goes, or else put out a verse/freeverse, talking about something imparticular yano?

overall good tho..
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Post by J-Majikk »

aight ima redo it
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